Talk:Tijuana Flats

Latest comment: 11 years ago by CorporateM in topic Feedback

WP:FOOD Tagging edit

This article talk page was automatically added with {{WikiProject Food and drink}} banner as it falls under Category:Restaurants or one of its subcategories. If you find this addition an error, Kindly undo the changes and update the inappropriate categories if needed. You can find the related request for tagging here -- TinucherianBot (talk) 11:29, 2 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

GA Nomination edit

Seeing if I can track down this source before renominating. CorporateM (Talk) 21:27, 27 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Feedback edit

Hi Corporate, I would agree with the reviewer that the article has a cheery sort of upbeat tone that is more indicative of a magazine article then the dispassionate style WP likes. The back story is personalize more than it needs to be and uses the names of what appear to be non-notable people (see WP:PRIVACY). The problem is if I/we fixed those things by summarizing and removing personal details it would be even shorter than it is now. So the solution is to expand the article and to my surprise there are dozens more sources you haven't found yet. For example see here: [1] I also get dozens of hits on High Beam. which you can apply for here.[2] Once you get going with more sources and 'fatten up' the article, I can help you to edit it so that it reads well and with a dispassionate tone. Its a great article so keep me posted on your progress and let me know how I can help. --KeithbobTalk 18:17, 31 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! I have a Highbeam account. I've only found droves of articles announcing the opening of specific locations. Can you share the sources you found? The NewsBank link is broken. CorporateM (Talk) 18:23, 31 January 2013 (UTC)Reply