Talk:Takabb Anti-Cough Pill

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Rjjiii in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Rjjiii talk 23:35, 30 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that one throat lozenge's packaging features five centipedes? Source: Khingkongsin, Jindawan จินดาวรรณ สิ่งคงสิน (2007-10-10). "ซิมเทียนฮ้อ "ห้าตะขาบ" ตำนาน 72 ปี จากบางคล้าโกอินเตอร์" [Sim Thian Ho "Five Centipedes" 72 year old legend from Bang Khla Go Inter]. Manager Daily (in Thai). Archived from the original on 2024-01-24. Retrieved 2024-01-24.

    The article notes: "หลายคนคงเคยเห็นโลโก้ตะขาบ 5 ตัวมาแล้วและหลายคนก็เคยใช้มาแล้ว บางครั้งอาจรวมถึงตัวคุณด้วย แต่ใครจะรู้บ้างว่า จุดกำเนิดเป็นมาอย่างไร ใครจะรู้บ้างว่า ทำไมต้องเป็นตะขาบ 5 ตัว"

    From Google Translate: "Many people have probably seen the 5 centipede logo before and many have used it before. Sometimes this includes you. But who knows? What was the origin? Who knows? Why do they have to be 5 centipedes"

Created by Cunard (talk). Self-nominated at 09:47, 24 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Hatakabb; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

  • Article is new enough, created the day of the nomination. Article is more than long enough with almost 2000 words. I can't read/access most of the sources, but the English language one next to the hook claim in the article is more than enough to establish verifiability. The article is well-written and cited overall, and was highly interesting; I did not expect to be reading about a Thai cough drop company today. Likewise, the hook is intriguing. However, I would suggest a slight rewording:
ALT1: ... that the packaging of one Thai throat lozenge features five centipedes?
  •   The ALT hook is by no means required, and I leave it to the nominator or promoter to pick which one to use. Thanks for a great article! Very Respectfully, Fritzmann (message me) 15:47, 25 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Thank you for the kind words about the article, for the review, and for suggesting ALT1! I think ALT1 reads better so support it over the original hook. Cunard (talk) 08:32, 26 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Non-independent sources I did not use edit

Here are two sources from reputable publishers that I did not use because they are not independent of the subject:

  1. Chantarasakha, Kanittha; Asawapanumas, Thiti; Suntivich, Rinrada; Panya, Atikorn; Phonsatta, Natthaporn; Thiennimitr, Parameth; Laoteng, Kobkul; Tepaamorndech, Surapun (March 2022). "Hatakabb, a herbal extract, contains pyrogallol as the novel mediator inhibiting LPS-induced TNF-α production by NF-κB inactivation and HMOX-1 upregulation". Journal of Functional Foods. 90. doi:10.1016/j.jff.2022.104992. Archived from the original on 2022-02-18. Retrieved 2024-01-24.

    The article was funded by Hatakabb. The article notes:

    Declaration of Competing Interest

    The authors declare that they have no known competing financial interests or personal relationships that could have appeared to influence the work reported in this paper. The funders, including Hatakabb and their employees, had no role in study design, collection, analysis, decision to publish, and preparation of the manuscript.

    Acknowledgements

    This project was co-funded from NSTDA, and Hatakabb (Sim Tein Hor) Co., Ltd (P2050200). The funders had no role in study design, collection, analysis, decision to publish, and preparation of he manuscript. We thank Suknimit Sujira for her administrative support.

    Furthermore, this is a primary source that provides a lot of biomedical information about Hatakabb. Since it is a primary source rather than a secondary source, Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources (medicine) says it cannot be used to verify biomedical information.
  2. "Herbal medicine maker Hatakabb leverages all-natural trend in expansion plan". South China Morning Post. 2018-12-07. Archived from the original on 2023-09-28. Retrieved 2024-01-24.

    This article is by an "advertising partner".

Cunard (talk) 10:17, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Scope and title edit

Per WP:PRODUCT, when a company is mostly known for a single product line, "This article can be the name of the company or the name of its product, depending on which is the primary topic." Here, the company's name is much less known than its products. I suggest having the article at Takabb Anti-Cough Pill or just Takabb, which appears to be how the brand is marketed in English. --Paul_012 (talk) 01:41, 28 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi Paul 012 (talk · contribs). I am fine with a rename to either of the two titles focused on the product line. Cunard (talk) 01:52, 28 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've renamed the article from Hatakabb to Takabb Anti-Cough Pill. Cunard (talk) 08:34, 28 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the reply and update. I'll see if I can go through the article in more detail sometime. --Paul_012 (talk) 14:46, 28 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for adding File:Takabb Anti-Cough Pills on a drugstore shelf in Thailand.jpg and for correcting issues in the article! Cunard (talk) 04:56, 29 January 2024 (UTC)Reply