Talk:Spanish patrol boat Serviola

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Did you know nomination edit

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:35, 26 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

 
Spanish patrol boat Serviola

Created by Fritzmann2002 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:01, 28 September 2022 (UTC).Reply

  • New enough, long enough, looks neutral, well cited and no plagiarism detected. Photo seems free and looks OK as a thumbnail. QPQ done. ALT0 is better than ALT1, but may I suggest:
    • ALT2: ... that the Spanish patrol boat Serviola thwarted two attempts at piracy in the Gulf of Guinea in as many months in 2019?
As an aside, the only Equatoguinean frigate seems to be the Wele-Nzas, so it would be nice to name her in the article if you can find a source. Srnec (talk) 01:04, 9 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  •   Adding an icon and a courtesy ping of Fritzmann2002. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 00:21, 20 October 2022 (UTC) + Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 00:21, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
    • Thank you for the review, could we put the year first in the hook? i.e. [Refactored below] Either way, whatever you think the best wording of ALT0 would be is 100% fine with me. Fritzmann (message me) 00:54, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
ALT2a: ... that in 2019, the Spanish patrol boat Serviola thwarted two attempts at piracy in as many months?
Courtesy ping of Srnec. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 01:20, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  Support ALT2a, but I'd drop the comma. Srnec (talk) 01:35, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply