Talk:Shayne Gostisbehere

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Shayne Gostisbehere/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 16:59, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Prose

Lede

• the minor affiliate - either say and link "minor team", or link "minor affiliate", otherwise the link is a bit out of place. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I have changed it to "youth affiliate", because "minor" here refers to the age of the players and not the level of play. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• You link Florida but not Connecticut. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I added and linked the city. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• From there, he played three seasons of college ice hockey with the Union Dutchmen of the ECAC Hockey - is this still in Connecticut? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added that Union is in New York. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• Breakout rookie season - I thought he had already played for them in prior years? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • For contractual reasons, a player's "rookie" season is the first season in which they play six or more NHL games. This is usually done so that clubs can hold onto their players for longer, as most entry-level contracts are for a span of three seasons. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• Who called it a breakout year? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Reworded here, but explained down below. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• After the heights of the 2017–18 season - fluff. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added a different modifier. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• Lede should mention his international stuff. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

General

• Wow, Jai alai looks like squash with a wooden lacrosse style bat. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
• "Panthers’ Incredible"... Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Not sure what the comment was here, but Incredible Ice is the name of the facility. It was unnecessary, so it was removed. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• What is AAA? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The highest level of minor hockey; that WL now explains that. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• Suitable link for travelling teams? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  •  Done — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• Despite being drafted by the Flyers in 2012, - this should probably be expanded upon in the prose. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Moved the line about his draft from the section on the Flyers to the college section. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• When you say "breakout", is this a statistical thing, or a quote? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • More like common hockey terminology for when a player sees a massive uptick in scoring. See articles like this and this for potential breakout players in the coming seasons. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• Union's tournament run came to an end in the following game, when Matthew Peca of Quinnipiac scored a hat trick in the first three minutes and 12 seconds of the East Regional finals.[ - final score? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  •  Added — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:59, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Lee Vilenski All edits have been addressed, and additional comments have been left above. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)