Talk:Richard Orsini

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Richard Orsini/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Will take on all three related articles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  Y
  • Passes spot checks  Y

Discussion

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Prose Suggestions

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Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

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  • Recommend expanding the lede with details of his military campaign and death, but I think it still satisfies lede coverage as is.

Family

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