Talk:Rewolucyjni Mściciele

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Piotrus in topic B-class review

Unclear?

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It was asked to clarify this sentence: "The group paid attention to propaganda, leaving notes and sending letters to newspapers and the authorities". But I find it clear, I am not sure what can be confusing? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 16:40, 30 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • I was unable to read any of the relevant citations as they are in Polish, and I would have rewritten along with my other copyediting to the article had I known what it meant. I queried the apparent ambiguity in "paying attention to propaganda" – what does it mean; also what does 'leaving notes' mean – who were these destined for? Hope I'm explaining myself clearly here. Thing is I'm unsure in what way leaving notes and sending letters could be propagandistic, so perhaps a clearer explanation of what these notes said would be beneficial. --Ohconfucius ¡digame! 16:50, 30 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • P.S. I still can't parse "The situation in the city was tense, with poor working conditions and actions such as lockouts,[1] a 16-hour working week, no insurance, no pension, poor wages, and anger after the failed uprising that left over a hundred that – this was a situation fertile for socialist and anarchist organizers." Seems like the phrase is incomplete after "hundred". --Ohconfucius ¡digame! 16:55, 30 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

B-class review

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Passing for WP:POLAND per previous assessment by MILHIST. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 23:42, 4 May 2012 (UTC)Reply