There were few changes that needed to be made apart from some grammatical changes when explaining how the Pope approached his arguments yet I did not change much considering much of the information was quoted indirectly. To make the article clear that this composition was written by a deceased pontiff I changed the wording to past tense, (sorry I studied journalism for four years and it's something I look for). But I did not change the tense of the 'implication' portion of the article and again only tightened up the sentence structure but not by much, finding the content important and comprehensive to begin with. Therefore my edits were on a very minuscule level with only a few changes to diction and syntax.(Petite09 (talk) 13:49, 8 April 2009 (UTC)Petite09)Reply
