Talk:Nicholas Orsini

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Cielquiparle in topic Did you know nomination

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Nicholas Orsini/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:23, 5 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Will take on all three related articles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:23, 5 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  Y
  • Passes spot checks  Y

Discussion

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Prose Suggestions

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Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

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  • usurped rule of Epirus from his uncle, Thomas Komnenos Doukas, whom he murdered suggest murdered his uncle, Thomas Komnenos Doukas, and usurped his rule of Epirus.
  • @Cplakidas: That is my only suggestion; passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:35, 5 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 13:08, 19 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Nicholas Orsini became Despot of Epirus by murdering his uncle, only to be in turn killed by his brother five years later? Source: Nicol 1984 p. 80 "But before the year was out Thomas was dead, murdered by his nephew Nicholas Orsini..." and p. 92 "Gregoras seems also to imply that it was a direct act of fratricide. A later decree of the patriarch's synod, however, indicates that Nicholas was killed as the result of war with his brother."

Improved to Good Article status by Cplakidas (talk). Self-nominated at 17:03, 6 February 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Nicholas Orsini, so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: Done.
Overall:   @Cplakidas: Good article. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:29, 6 February 2023 (UTC)Reply