Talk:Mother Marie-Anastasie

Latest comment: 7 years ago by CaroleHenson in topic Major edits of the article

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I cannot find sources for:

  • Her parents, Joseph Conduché, a shoemaker and devoted Christian, and Marie-Jeanne Artières.
  • Her mother's uncle her uncle, Jean-Pierre Gavalda, priest of Bor and her nephew, Jean-François Gavalda who used to work with him.
  • Her parent had six children, but only two of their daughters survived – Alexandrine and Joséphine.[citation needed] Alexandrine Conduché, the oldest, was educated at home by her parents until the age of four. After that, she went to Compeyre School. Shortly after, her parents transferred her to a school in the neighboring parish in Aguessac, followed by the Union Sisters.
  • Since she was a little girl, Conduché showed a great interest in knowing the life of the saints and she used to spend a long time reading about them. At eleven years old she made her first communion.
  • she was pulled out of school to care for her sick mother and take care of the household. Her father didn’t have a job, and the family experienced a difficult period of poverty.
  • From 1863 to 1878, Mother Marie-Anastasie opened 17 new school communities: Le Mauron (1863), Saint-Hippolyte (1866), Notre Dame de Laval (1867), Lescure (1867), Prades (1867), Puech-Auriol (1868), Tayac (1868), Saint-Hilaire de Rodez (1868), Beteille (1869), Floirac (1870), Montgey (1870), Venès (1872), Saint-Laurent (1874), Lalo (1875), Artigues (1876), Villevayre (1877).

CaroleHenson (talk) 00:13, 15 May 2017 (UTC)Reply

Major edits of the article

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The article was reverted to an earlier version, so I thought I would sum up the changes since this version, which, had these maintenance tags:

  • This article may require copy editing for grammar due to translation from Portugese. (May 2017)
  • This article is an orphan, as no other articles link to it. Please introduce links to this page from related articles; try the Find link tool for suggestions. (May 2017)
  • This article needs additional citations for verification. (May 2017)
  • The template below (Underlinked) is being considered for merging. See templates for discussion to help reach a consensus. This article needs more links to other articles to help integrate it into the encyclopedia. (May 2017)

This article was a translation of the Portuguese article, Madre_Marie-Anastasie. I'm not sure if the guidelines are different based upon the language it is written in, but I attributed the guidelines that apply to English-language articles.

Here's a summary of the edits:

  • There were two sections that had duplicate information: Biography and Chronology - so that content was combined. Content should also be in prose, versus lists in the body of the article, so this change solved two issues.
  • There was a great deal of content that was uncited, or where there were citations, they often {{failed verification}}. See WP:Citing sources.
  • Also, Wikipedia should not be used as a source, see WP:CIRCULAR.
  • I reviewed and edited the article and used sources that I could find to cite the article content. Where I couldn't find sources for the content, it was moved to the "Sources" section above. If sources can be found, the content can be returned.
  • There was also a fair amount of editing for brevity and encyclopedic tone. See the guidance essay Wikipedia:The perfect article - "Is well written" section.
  • Punctuation goes before the citations in the English-language articles, see WP:PAIC
  • Only the first instance of the subject of the article (in the lead) should be bolded. See MOS:BOLD

Now, all of the maintenance tags have been resolved and all of the content is cited. As an FYI, this is one of the article that I worked on as a reviewer of articles in the Special:NewPagesFeed.–CaroleHenson (talk) 13:37, 15 May 2017 (UTC)Reply