Talk:Monorail Espresso

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Bluerasberry in topic New Edit

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 January 2022 and 18 March 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yoshi-dawg (article contribs). Peer reviewers: YAM97.

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I edited this article and would appreciate any feedback or contributions. Yoshi-dawg (talk) 23:46, 10 February 2022 (UTC) Yoshi-dawgReply

@Yoshi-dawg: Here are the edits to which you refer.
This is great! Thanks for taking pictures also. Two of your citations link to proquest and newsbank. Note that these are subscription archives that you have at your university, so these are not the original sources. Can you expand on the citations here and try to identify and credit the original work? It is probably some newspaper or magazine.
The content looks great! Bluerasberry (talk) 13:30, 11 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hey I went in and fixed my citations for those two references. I referenced the newspaper articles more specifically. Thank you for the feedback! Yoshi-dawg (talk) 18:23, 11 February 2022 (UTC)Yoshi-dawgReply

👍 Bluerasberry (talk) 19:45, 11 February 2022 (UTC)Reply