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Canadian should probably be not linked per MOS:OVERLINK Done
"He was selected by the Jets in the first round, seventh overall, of the 2011 NHL Entry Draft, the Jets' first draft pick after relocating from Atlanta." - repetition of "Jets"
Changed to teams', is that OK?
Perphaps added a little more about Scheifele's NHL career?
Wikilink minor hockey to the appropriate article Done
Wikilinks to exhibition game and entry-level contract might be of a benefit to non-hockey readers Done
Links for goal, assist and point to the relevant articles would benefit those who do not understand those terms Done
"he was re-assigned to the OHL and rejoined the Barrie Colts." - why was Scheifele reassigned to play in the OHL? Done
"he was called-up by the Jets" - "called-up" is not hyphenated Done
"Scheifele participated in the Jets' training camp ahead of the 2012–13 season," - needs a reliable citation to verify because it is not mentioned in the NHL source at the end of the paragraph this portion of text is a part of Done
"During the Ontario Hockey League playoffs," - think the Ontario Hockey League should be in parentheses not its full name Done
"from the London Knights' Josh Anderson" - this might need a little rewording since the wording is close to the Yahoo! source verifying it Done
"During the 2014–15 offseason, Scheifele used DNA testing to bulk up" - what does it mean to bulk up? To increase his muscle mass? Done
"he arrived at the Jets' training camp 11 pounds heavier than the previous season." - the {{convert}} will need to be used on the text in bold Done
Face offs can be wikilinked to help non-Hockey readers Done
"he scored his first NHL hat-trick in a game against the Montreal Canadiens on March 5, 2016, thus ending the teams' three-game losing streak." - repetition of "game" Done
"Scheifele signed an eight year," - a hyphen is missing between "eight" and "year" Done
"At the time, the current captain Blake Wheeler has two years left in his contract." - Wheeler had two years Done
"Scheifele recorded 60 points in 60 games despite missing a total 22 games due to injuries." - repetition of "games" Done
"to discuss food theory and write up a meal plan." - this portion of text is too close to the ESPN, so it will need Done
Wikilink high sticked to High-sticking for non-hockey readers Done
"Scheifele rejoined the team for the 2019–20 season which was unexpectedly paused due to COVID-19." - Am aware this is factually correct, but it will need to be verified by a reliable source Done
"At the time of his selection, he leads" - past tense; led Done
"Scheifele said he holds no ill will against Tkachuk and didn't believe he intended to injure him." - no contractions please, per MOS:CONTRACTION Done
"On June 2, 2021, against the Montreal Canadiens for the first game of the second round of the playoffs, he hits an extremely dangerous check on Jake Evans in the last minute of the third period as the Montreal's foward has just scored in an empty net."
"In 2019, Scheifele announced his decision to skip the tournament after the Jets were eliminated from the Stanley Cup playoffs." - what tournament are we referring to? Done
"a charity that aims to remove the financial barriers to playing sports," - needs to be verified since I could not find that information in the source that is attached to the end of the sentence this portion of text is a part of Done