Talk:Luz Noceda

Latest comment: 10 months ago by Historyday01 in topic Editing down the summary

Edit request edit

Can I add her to Category:Fictional revolutionaries? I mean if the Plantars are in that category despite not having pages (yet), then surely she can, as there were a number of parallels between those two shows including the overarching plot of liberation from tyranny. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alena 33 (talkcontribs) 21:29, 30 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

Sure, why not. Historyday01 (talk) 23:44, 30 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

Article about Amity edit

Hello. I wanted to propose/ask, if maybe we should also make article about Amity, another character from the show, and Luz's girlfriend. When it comes to LGBTQ+ representation, I feel that she's on the simlar level to Luz, and she's also pretty much present in the show. What's others opinion about that? Artemis Andromeda (talk) 14:03, 4 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

I would be definitely interested in helping out with an article like that potentially! I looked up if there was a draft page for Amity but there was no page made so far, so if you want to make one feel free and I will definitely be interested in contributing! --Ornithoptera (talk) 04:34, 18 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
Oh, a page about Amity would be great. I think there definitely are enough sources for her. Historyday01 (talk) 17:13, 26 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
If you guys wanted to make an article about Amity, here it is: Draft:Amity Blight. Starkiryu64 (talk) 04:04, 18 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! I'll do some work on it sometime this month if I have some time. Historyday01 (talk) 12:49, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
Got a considerable chunk done yesterday. Still a long way to go! Mjeims (talk) 13:37, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
A very long way to get approved. Starkiryu64 (talk) 05:37, 5 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Editing down the summary edit

Currently the summary is flagged as being too long/ including too much detail, so I want to propose taking out any unnecessary information (for example, mentions of luz being the first bisexual character as that is already mentioned in the LGBTQ+ representation section) to slim it down. Also to rewrite it from a neutral point of view. Eyelesssjack (talk) 22:12, 17 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Do you mean the "Fictional character biography" section? Because that section is overly long and should be cut down. The "Character and conception" section is pretty short already, and I see no point in cutting that at this point, while the "Reception" section is also pretty short. Historyday01 (talk) 01:53, 18 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
Yes that's what I meant by the summary - sorry for any confusion. Eyelesssjack (talk) 15:34, 18 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
That's ok! I think some fans got too excited and added too much there. Historyday01 (talk) 16:01, 18 July 2023 (UTC)Reply