Talk:Lee Quede
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Response to the Peer review
editThank you Mina for the great feedbacks and comments!
Yes, as you mentioned, I needed to add Lead section and introductory sentences about the artist to make a brief description of what are the major sections of this article are about.
About the content, I would say that one of the reasons I added info about Lee's brother was because I could not find that much of information about Lee's early life and even his parents. Most of the sources that I have found are about his later life and what did he do in his art work.
Also, as you mentioned about how the tone is not completely neutral, I kind of agree with you except one part. I do not agree with explaining what the paintings evoke. If I describe the paintings based on my personal perspective and reference the viewers as "we" then I am going to be bias. The whole descriptions are going to be bias and not neutral. Also, I was not sure what I am feeling about the feedback of avoiding the word "Provoke" because it makes the writing sounds argumentative. I will look more into that.
About the references, I will make sure to have more resources before I publish the article; thank you for reminding me that. I will also make sure to add few pictures.
Thank you!
Response to the Peer Review
editHi Ahmajorette,
Thank you for your feedbacks; they have been so helpful.
I will make sure to change the heading of "Activities" to "Art Movement" and add a section about Lee's death and legacy. I do agree that these two changes actually make the article way more organize.
There was another feedback that I am confused about. You said that the last sentence of the first paragraph of this section could be more clear. Do you mean in the terms of its grammar or context? Either way I think that is a good summary of what he has done, especially if I put it in the Lead section.
Feedback from New Page Review process
editI left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nice job on the article. Hope you contribute more to the project.