Talk:Lansing Mall

Latest comment: 5 years ago by TenPoundHammer in topic GA Review

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Well, I think you did succeed in doing it. This is a defensible article. DGG (talk) 10:19, 21 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

Thanks. I still can't find a single source on the original anchors though. I've been told Federal's, Arbaugh's (or Wurzburg's, or maybe both), and The Fair, but I can't verify any of them. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshellsOtter chirps) 13:20, 21 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

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GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 00:10, 2 October 2018 (UTC)Reply


Opening statement edit

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History edit

  • The article never describes what exactly Wurzburg's is.
  •   Done Clarified that it was a department store.
  • The Lansing Mall was built just outside the city of Lansing, Michigan, the state's capital, within Delta Township along M-43 (Saginaw Highway). Built by Forbes-Cohen, it officially opened to the public on July 31, 1969. Reduce this to one sentence; it's kind of redundant as it is.
  •   Done Copy edited.
  • Reduce "1990s and 2000s" to a === header, and change the name to something like "1990s to present."
  •   Done Changed header.
  • Panera Bread[22] MOS:REFPUNCT
  •   Done I knew that you'd point this out, so I fixed it before you noted it.

Photo gallery edit

Dissolve and disperse all two pictures in the gallery in the article prose.

  •   Done Pictures moved.

GA progress edit

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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