Talk:L'Estampe originale

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Storye book in topic comments on dyk comments

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Thanks for these. My responses:

  • 1) happy with it as is
  • 2) fixed
  • 3) rejigged
  • 4) changed
  • 5) not seeing this
  • 6) done
  • 7) sorted
  • 8) The lead says "embossed" which is enough I think.

Johnbod (talk) 17:06, 15 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

I have now corrected the disambig (issue no.7) to a red link, which is acceptable at DYK, and I have struck out that issue on the DYK nom template. Storye book (talk) 10:49, 20 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
Thank you, Jonbod, for looking over the above issues - much appreciated. Sorry it's too late for me to be able to strike out the resolved issues on the DYK template, but I hope that this comment will suffice. All the best. Storye book (talk) 08:25, 23 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Johnbod: I've just noticed an anomaly in the first line of the header. You have a singular "a" with a plural "portfolios". I can't correct it for you as I'm not sure whether you mean one portfolio, several portfolios, or one set of portfolios. Please could you check it out? Thank you. Storye book (talk) 09:57, 24 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
Ah, hang on, I think I see what's wrong. There should be a comma after "periodical." Then it will make sense. But please check it anyway? Thanks. Storye book (talk) 10:00, 24 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
It reads fine to me. You do need to realize that periodical is a noun: " a French periodical (singular bit) || publishing portfolios (plural bit) ". I suppose one would add a "which" or "that", rather than a comma, as the sentence is short. I've linked periodical. Hope that does it. Johnbod (talk) 15:48, 24 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
No worries, it's fine now. Thank you. Storye book (talk) 17:11, 24 September 2020 (UTC)Reply