Talk:Kong Dongmei

Latest comment: 1 year ago by BorgQueen in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk13:28, 21 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

Created by Toadboy123 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:19, 23 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Kong Dongmei; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing:   - A couple of concerns about the "Personal life" section. The article says "The couple had an extramarital relationship" with a wikilink to Affair. Is this true? All I can find in the cited sources is "两人苦恋15年", which sounds like there were feelings in at least one direction but not necessarily an affair. I think we need more unambiguous sourcing for this claim, especially in a BLP. The claim that Kong's three children have "come under criticism due to it being a violation of the one-child policy" doesn't seem to be supported by the cited sources either.
  • Neutral:  
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:  

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:   - ALT0 has problems as discussed above. ALT1 doesn't seem to be supported by the source – the hook says RMB 3 billion, but the source says RMB 5 billion.
  • Interesting:  

QPQ:   - Still needed
Overall:   The article looks mostly good, but there are some issues that need attention. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 19:00, 4 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

  @Toadboy123: Thanks! That's a big improvement. I've made a minor copyedit to ALT1, to clarify the currency conversion and fix what I assume was a typo. ALT1 looks good to me now. All that's needed is the QPQ. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 02:04, 8 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
QPQ done Template:Did you know nominations/Davolls General Store. Toadboy123 (talk) 9:11, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
  Thanks! Good to go. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 13:59, 13 March 2023 (UTC)Reply