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Knowmadic Ahmed Ali, better known by the pseudonym Knowmadic, is an internationally recognized award-winning Somali-Canadian poet, writer, actor, musician, and youth activist.[1][2] He will serve a two-year term as Edmonton's Poet Laureate, from July 1, 2017, to June 30, 2019, as its seventh Poet Laureate.[5] References Personal Life Knowmadic was born November 28, 1984, in Mogadishu, to a nomadic father and a mother whose family were farmers. His name is a portmanteau of knowledge and nomadic, arming ideas and emotions in people in the sense that he is now herding words. He partially chose the name because his father was a nomad and his mother was a farmer, both from Mogadishu. His grandfather was a nomad too. He combined the words because he wished to acquire, seek and distribute knowledge, a poetic ode to his forbearers.[2] Anticipating the civil war, his father raised enough funds through the community to travel to Italy with the hopes of finding a better life outside of Somalia. His family fled to Italy in 1989 before the onset of the Somali Civil War.[5] When they arrived in Italy, Knowmadic and his 3 older brothers were forced into boarding schools where they felt a tremendous culture shock. Finding life difficult in Italy, Ahmed’s family immigrated to Canada on the sponsorship of the Canadian government, and settled in Edmonton, Alberta.[2] Within a year, his family moved to Kitchener Ontario, eventually returning to Edmonton, Alberta in 2008. Knowmadic is married and has two daughters, Layla Ali and Maya Ali. References Career Knowmadic began his artistic career in high school where he toured and performed for primary students in Kitchener, Ontario and the surrounding area. Upon graduating, he attended Humber College for Comedy writing and performance. He had always written poetry but began his foray into spoken word when he returned to Edmonton, Alberta in 2009. While attending University in Edmonton, Alberta Knowmadic received an opportunity to be an Artist in residence for the Langston Hughes performing arts Center and began pursuing poetry as a full-time career.[2] in 2011, Knowmadic became the first Somali Spoken word Champion in Canada. Knowmadic is versed in the Somali oral traditions (spoken-word) and in western poetry. He has travelled to the United States, Wales, Sudan and London both to teach and perform poetry. In 2017 Ahmed was named Edmonton's Poet Laureate becoming the first Somali born Poet Laureate in North America.[5] In January 2018, he hosted the APAP Annual Awards Ceremony in New York, honouring Martin Luther King.[1] He is a registered vendor with the Edmonton public school board and does keynotes for the Alberta's Teachers Association. Knowmadic is not only a professional artist who makes income from art but someone who is in the community, building bridges and establishing long-term connections. He his sits on community boards like the Edmonton Arts Council where he chairs the equity committee. From artistic endeavours to community initiatives, Knowmadic actively supports the community through collaborative efforts. [3] He has participated in vigils against violence and has also worked in attempting to integrate refugee children.[6] References Political Invovelment He is actively involved in municipal and provincial government. In 2017, he was runner up for public school board trustee in Ward A in Edmonton.[4] In 2018, Ahmed spoke on behalf of the Somali community to condemn an attack on an Edmonton Police Officer, stating that anyone who commits such violence is not part of the Somali community. Knowmadic regularly works with the provincial government to make Alberta a more inclusive province. References Awards and Nominations Top 30 Under 30 Cultural Diversity in the Arts Awards Canadian Champion of Spoken word Top 40 Under 40 Human Rights References Published In The Great Black North Rubicon Publishing - Early civilizations of Africa Category Huston's Favorite Poems References

Thank you for your time, effort and consideration. Confident Camel (talk) 05:40, 12 February 2019 (UTC)

Reply 12-FEB-2019

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I was unable to implement your edit request for two reasons:

• The prose has not been written in WP:FORMAL tone. Providing greater assistance in this matter would go beyond the purview of a simple edit request, but I am able to provide two examples below. For more in-depth help with writing an article which uses formal tone I would suggest reaching out to editors at the Biography WikiProject. Two quick examples of problematic prose:

1. "Anticipating the civil war, his father raised enough funds through the community to travel to Italy with the hopes of finding a better life outside of Somalia. His family fled to Italy in 1989 before the onset of the Somali Civil War. When they arrived in Italy, Knowmadic and his 3 older brothers were forced into boarding schools where they felt a tremendous culture shock." The prose as it is written here conveys too much emotion. This emotion makes the article sound less formal in tone. A better example would be to state that the family left Italy and that the four children were educated at boarding schools.
2. "He partially chose the name because his father was a nomad and his mother was a farmer, both from Mogadishu. His grandfather was a nomad too. He combined the words because he wished to acquire, seek and distribute knowledge, a poetic ode to his forbearers." This prose is too conversational in tone, as it reads similar to how one would speak to a listener ("His grandfather was a nomad, too"). Because readers of this prose will be reading it to themselves and not actually listening to a speaker face to face, this tone detracts from the information by confusing the context of where it is being read. In this example it would be better to simply state that the name is a portmanteau of the words knowledge and nomadic.

• The provided references are not formatted correctly. On this point I am able to offer more in-depth assistance. The citation style predominantly used by the Knowmadic article is Citation Style 1 (CS1), while the citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests should be submitted in the future:

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Bare URL reference formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,<ref>https://www.booksource.com</ref> while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<ref>https://www.journalsource.com</ref> The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.<ref>https://www.websource.com</ref> Displays as: The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.[3] References 1. https://www.booksource.com 2. http://www.journalsource.com 3. http://www.websource.com In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Knowmadic article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text would resemble the following: Citation Style 1 formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,<ref>{{cite book|last1=Sjöblad|first1=Tristan|title=The Sun|url=http://www.booksource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2018|page=1}}</ref> while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<ref>{{cite journal|last1=Duvalier|first1=Gabrielle|title=Size of the Moon|journal=Scientific American|issue=78|volume=51|url=http://www.journalsource.com|date=2018|page=46}}</ref> The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.<ref>{{cite web|last1=Uemura|first1=Shu|title=The Sun's Heat|url=http://www.websource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2018|page=2}}</ref> Displays as: The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin. References In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, larger edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

If you could rewrite the references so that they resemble the second example shown in the collapsed section above, it would be much appreciated. After the prose has been re-written in a more formal style, please feel free to re-submit this edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any additional questions about formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards,  Spintendo  08:30, 12 February 2019 (UTC)

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Knowmadic Ahmed Ali, better known by the pseudonym Knowmadic, is an internationally recognized award-winning Somali-Canadian poet, writer, actor, musician, and youth activist. He will serve a two-year term as Edmonton's Poet Laureate, from July 1, 2017, to June 30, 2019, as its seventh Poet Laureate. References Personal Life Knowmadic was born November 28, 1984, in Mogadishu, to a nomadic father and a mother whose family were farmers. His name is a portmanteau of knowledge and nomadic. He combined the words because he wished to acquire, seek and distribute knowledge. His family immigrated to Italy in 1989.In Italy, Knowmadic and his 3 older brothers stayed in boarding schools. His family immigrated to Canada in 1992 on the sponsorship of the Canadian government, and settled in Edmonton, Alberta. His family moved to Kitchener Ontario in 1993, and returned to Edmonton, Alberta in 2008. Knowmadic is married and has two daughters. References Career In high school, Knowmadic wrote and toured a play for primary students in Kitchener, Ontario and the surrounding area. Upon graduating, he attended Humber College in Toronto, Ontario for Comedy writing and performance. He was introduced to spoken word in 2009 by Titilope Sonuga who curated a regular poetry night called Rouge Poetry. Titilope Sonuga invited Knowmadic and others in the founding of the Breath in Poetry Collective. in 2011, Knowmadic and team Edmonton beat 20 teams from across Canada at Canadian Festival of Spoken Word becoming the first Somali Spoken word Champion in Canada. In 2013, Knowmadic received an opportunity to be Artist in residence at the Langston Hughes Performing Arts Center in Seattle, Washington, initiating his career as a full-time artist. Knowmadic is versed in the Somali oral traditions (Spoken word) and in western poetry. He has travelled to the United States, Wales, Sudan and London both to teach and perform poetry. In 2017 Ahmed was named Edmonton's Poet Laureate becoming the first Somali born Poet Laureate in North America. In January 2018, he hosted the APAP Annual Awards Ceremony in New York, New York, honouring Martin Luther King. He is a registered vendor with the Edmonton Public Schools and does keynotes for the Alberta's Teachers Association. Knowmadic sits on community boards like the Edmonton Arts Council where he chairs the equity committee.Knowmadic actively supports the community through collaborative efforts. He has participated in vigils against violence and has also worked in attempting to integrate refugee children. References Political Invovelment In 2017, he was runner up for public school board trustee in Ward A in Edmonton. In 2018, Ahmed spoke on behalf of the Somali community to condemn an alleged terrorist attack on an Edmonton Police Officer. Knowmadic works with the provincial government to make Alberta a more inclusive province. References Awards and Nominations Top 30 Under 30 Cultural Diversity in the Arts Awards Canadian Champion of Spoken word Top 40 Under 40 Human Rights Champions Award Michaëlle Jean Young Arts Entrepenuer Award References Art Residencies Langston Hughes Performing Arts Center Edmonton Mennonite Centre for Newcomers. References Published In The Great Black North Rubicon Publishing Huston's Favorite Poems References Discography Singles 2014: Smoke Detector Spoken Word Albums 2014: Oasis Hip Hop Albums 2018: Throwback (Instrumental) References

Confident Camel (talk) 03:35, 14 February 2019 (UTC)

Reply 16-FEB-2019

Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.  Spintendo  16:07, 16 February 2019 (UTC)

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Ahmed Ali, better known by the pseudonym Knowmadic, is an internationally recognized award-winning Somali-Canadian poet, writer, actor, musician, and youth activist.  Already done. He will serve a two-year term as Edmonton's Poet Laureate, from July 1, 2017, to June 30, 2019, as its seventh Poet Laureate.  Approved. Knowmadic was born November 28, 1984, in Mogadishu, to a nomadic father and a mother whose family were farmers. His name is a portmanteau of knowledge and nomadic. He combined the words because he wished to acquire, seek and distribute knowledge.  Already done. His family immigrated to Italy in 1989. In Italy, Knowmadic and his 3 older brothers stayed in boarding schools. His family immigrated to Canada in 1992 on the sponsorship of the Canadian government, and settled in Edmonton, Alberta. His family moved to Kitchener Ontario in 1993, and returned to Edmonton, Alberta in 2008. Knowmadic is married and has two daughters.  Partly approved. In high school, Knowmadic wrote and toured a play for primary students in Kitchener, Ontario and the surrounding area.  Declined. Upon graduating, he attended Humber College in Toronto, Ontario for Comedy writing and performance.  Approved. He was introduced to spoken word in 2009 by Titilope Sonuga who curated a regular poetry night called Rouge Poetry. Titilope Sonuga invited Knowmadic and others in the founding of the Breath in Poetry Collective.  Approved. in 2011, Knowmadic and team Edmonton beat 20 teams from across Canada at Canadian Festival of Spoken Word becoming the first Somali Spoken word Champion in Canada. Clarification needed. In 2013, Knowmadic received an opportunity to be Artist in residence at the Langston Hughes Performing Arts Center in Seattle, Washington, initiating his career as a full-time artist. Clarification needed. Knowmadic is versed in the Somali oral traditions (Spoken word) and in western poetry. Clarification needed. He has travelled to the United States, Wales, Sudan and London both to teach and perform poetry. Clarification needed. In 2017 Ahmed was named Edmonton's Poet Laureate becoming the first Somali born Poet Laureate in North America.  Approved. In January 2018, he hosted the APAP Annual Awards Ceremony in New York, New York, honouring Martin Luther King.  Approved. He is a registered vendor with the Edmonton Public Schools and does keynotes for the Alberta's Teachers Association.  Declined. Knowmadic sits on community boards like the Edmonton Arts Council where he chairs the equity committee. Clarification needed. Knowmadic actively supports the community through collaborative efforts. He has participated in vigils against violence and has also worked in attempting to integrate refugee children.  Declined. In 2017, he was runner up for public school board trustee in Ward A in Edmonton. Clarification needed. In 2018, Ahmed spoke on behalf of the Somali community to condemn an alleged terrorist attack on an Edmonton Police Officer. Knowmadic works with the provincial government to make Alberta a more inclusive province.  Declined. Awards, Art Residencies, Published in, Discography Clarification needed. ___________