Talk:Killing of Zohra Shah

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Eptalon in topic Neutrality...

RSs for improving the article edit

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Neutrality... edit

Hello, I just flagged the page with the {{npov}} tag;it is much too sensationalist, and not that factual. Even if this may be a case of child labour, it likely isn't one of slavery. The language therefore needs to be adapted to reflect this. So: more factual information, and less sensationalism please. (Yes, we might also discuss issues such as abuse of power, and violence against children). Note: the SEWP page has the same flag.Eptalon (talk) 22:34, 28 June 2021 (UTC)Reply