Talk:Käraste Bröder Systrar och Vänner

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
Good articleKäraste Bröder Systrar och Vänner has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
April 15, 2022Good article nomineeListed

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Käraste Bröder Systrar och Vänner/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)Reply


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Another review for you! --K. Peake 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I'll have limited availability for a little while now. Should be able to respond to most items! Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:26, 14 April 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead edit

  • Why is the cello instrument not sourced in the body?
    • It's sourced in the table. I've added it to Lyrics, where Bellman is the source.
  • "The epistle is dedicated" → "The epistle is subtitled"
    • Edited.
  • The wine setting is not directly sourced in the body
    • Edited, and added to Lyrics.

Background edit

  • Good

Song edit

Music and verse form edit

  • Audio sample looks good!
  • "each of sixteen lines." → "each consisting of sixteen lines."
    • Done.
  • Wikilink tempo
    • Done.

Lyrics edit

  • Good

Reception and legacy edit

  • Pipe to Bellman. Biografin should be on "her biography" only
    • Done.
  • "Those form one side" → "These form one side"
    • Done.
  • Merge the Bellman Society para with the above one
    • Done.
  • "where it is" → "on which it is"
    • This is correct in British English.
  • Imgs look good, apart from the part where a full-stop is used after an exclamation mark since this works as the ending punctuation
    • Done.

References edit

Sources edit

  • Good

External links edit

  • Good

Final comments and verdict edit

  •   On hold until all of the issues are fixed; quite a short review this! --K. Peake 19:51, 14 April 2022 (UTC)Reply
  •  Pass now, another solid job! --K. Peake 07:50, 15 April 2022 (UTC)Reply