Talk:Käraste Bröder Systrar och Vänner/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Another review for you! --K. Peake 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

Hi, I'll have limited availability for a little while now. Should be able to respond to most items! Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:26, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Why is the cello instrument not sourced in the body?
  • It's sourced in the table. I've added it to Lyrics, where Bellman is the source.
• "The epistle is dedicated" → "The epistle is subtitled"
  • Edited.
• The wine setting is not directly sourced in the body
  • Edited, and added to Lyrics.

Background

• Good

Song

Music and verse form

• Audio sample looks good!
• "each of sixteen lines." → "each consisting of sixteen lines."
  • Done.
• Wikilink tempo
  • Done.

Lyrics

• Good

Reception and legacy

• Pipe to Bellman. Biografin should be on "her biography" only
  • Done.
• "Those form one side" → "These form one side"
  • Done.
• Merge the Bellman Society para with the above one
  • Done.
• "where it is" → "on which it is"
  • This is correct in British English.
• Imgs look good, apart from the part where a full-stop is used after an exclamation mark since this works as the ending punctuation
  • Done.

References

• Copyvio score looks totally undetectable!!!
• WP:OVERLINK of Bellman Society on ref 14
  • Done.

Sources

• Good

External links

• Good

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; quite a short review this! --K. Peake 19:51, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
  • OK, all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:21, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, another solid job! --K. Peake 07:50, 15 April 2022 (UTC)