Talk:Japanese Arms Export Ban

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Djmaschek in topic B class assessment-Part 2

B class assessment

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  • Well referenced to good sources.
  • I would have liked to see a little more on the legislative passage of the original law and the backgrounds to the 1976 tightening and the 2014 loosening.
  • The lead is too short.
  • The prose and grammar would benefit from a submission to GOCE Requests.
  • No infobox, no images. Gog the Mild (talk) 09:58, 8 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

B class assessment-Part 2

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Start class. Clearly someone spent a lot of time and effort to write and cite this article. It only needs a few things to bring it to B class. See next. Djmaschek (talk) 02:36, 30 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • There are two uncited sentences or paragraphs (B1=no). One looks like it belongs to the introduction, but it makes a statement unsupported elsewhere in the article. Therefore it must be cited.
  • Gog the Mild's previous comment is pertinent: "I would have liked to see a little more on the legislative passage of the original law..." When did it get passed?
  • There is no clearly defined introduction (B3=no). The first sentence should include the article title. Please see any B class article for examples.
  • There are no supporting materials (b5=no). Try adding a photo that is relevant to this article: Prime Minister Abe or a Kawasaki C-2, for example.
  • It is not required, but an infobox legislation would be nice.