"a fabrication that Raymer came to believe was true"

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"a fabrication that Raymer came to believe was true" - I find this confusing. Who is Raymer - is that Rayner? What fabrication did he come to believe was true? Jayjg (talk) 02:18, 3 September 2010 (UTC)Reply

With some time from the creation of the article I will take the time to review the wording and clarify the details of the incident. Alansohn (talk) 05:32, 5 September 2010 (UTC)Reply
Have you made any progress yet? You created it Sept 1, so it's not that old yet. An IP changed the spelling of the name, but I still don't understand the sentence. Jayjg (talk) 20:22, 12 September 2010 (UTC)Reply
I did some rewording. Take a look at the changes when you have a chance. Alansohn (talk) 12:30, 13 September 2010 (UTC)Reply
That's much more clear, thank you. Jayjg (talk) 22:38, 15 September 2010 (UTC)Reply