Talk:Henry Bell (American football)

Latest comment: 6 months ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination edit

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 23:07, 1 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:54, 27 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Henry Bell (American football); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   DYKCheck shows it to have been expanded 5x within 7 days of nomination and to be compliant RE length, WP:EARWIG shows no copyvios. I think it's good to go (Although for the record this is one of my first DYK reviews so I may well be wrong / am open to correction.) Bravo, BeanieFan11. Maximilian775 (talk)

@Maximilian775 and BeanieFan11: The line for the hook is : "Despite having never played college football, Bell was able to make the Broncos' final roster; he was one of only six players active in either the AFL or National Football League (NFL) that season to have never played collegiately" but citations 6 and 7 do not support the sentence. Bruxton (talk) 22:16, 1 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Bruxton: Yes they do: citation six verifies him as being on the team during the regular season – you can't not make the team but be on the team in the regular season; and citation seven is PFR's list of NFL/AFL players who did not go college – if you click on the column to the right of "Yrs," they will be ordered by date, and then you will see that only six players had careers that included 1960 who did not go to college. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:53, 1 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
@BeanieFan11: Thank you for showing me how to find the college information. I saw that he made the team but the college claim was hard to verify with a link to a list. I was on an Easter egg hunt and now I have found the egg. Bruxton (talk) 23:06, 1 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Henry Bell (American football)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 22:43, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

I'll take a look at this today or tomorrow. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 22:43, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Notes edit

  • Added the African-American players of American football cat
  • Added the NFL WikiProject tag to the talk page
  • I'm not sure why "one-year" in the lead has a hyphen.
    • Changed.
  • Could you find anything on his life after football?
    • There's this interview from 2018 but it doesn't really have much on his post-football life besides that he is still bothered by an untreated turf toe injury (ouch!).

Okay, I thought this might take longer but that's all I could find for this one. Nice research. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:01, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply