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Latest comment: 13 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion
Hi, per the request on WP:MHA I have assessed the article. It looks like a solid B class article to me. I noticed two things that you might consider tweaking:
the last sentence in the Career section could probably be tightened up. For instance: "Only 93 men were not rescued by the other destroyers, although five of the 234 survivors later died of their wounds." This could probably be reworded to: "98 members of the ship's crew lost their lives: 93 were lost at sea, while another five, who had originally been among the 234 men rescued, died of their wounds";
in the Notes there is "Groener" but in the References it is "Gröner". This should probably be consistent. AustralianRupert (talk) 09:25, 7 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
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