Talk:Fort McKavett State Historic Site

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Vami IV in topic GA Review
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November 8, 2021Good article nomineeListed
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Comment edit

According to Robert E. Howard (of Conan fame) this Fort's greatest enemy wasn't the Commanche but the locals:

http://en.wikisource.org/wiki/July_1933%2C_to_August_Derleth http://en.wikisource.org/wiki/July_1933%2C_to_H._P._Lovecraft

Note these letters were written to two other famous authors of the day August Derleth and H.P. Lovecraft. Howard gives local color to the stories and realize these letters were only 40 years or so after the fact.

Ironwolf21 13:41, 12 April 2007 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:43, 5 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Will look at soon. Hog Farm Talk 19:43, 5 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Wound up being a lot busier this weekend than expected, hopefully I can get to this tomorrow. Hog Farm Talk 04:02, 7 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • "Texas was annexed by the United States of America in 1845" - briefly mention Texian independence from Mexico, so it's clearer that it don't go straight from Mexican to US control?
  • Infobox says built 1846, but this doesn't seem to be what the article content says at all?
  • "General David E. Twiggs" - Twiggs was technically a Brig. Gen (brevet Maj. Gen) at this point in time
  • "Confederate forces were unable to defend Texas" - Against whom? I assume the Native Americans, as the Union didn't really do much in Texas beyond the Gulf Coast
  • " Brevet Major General Ranald S. Mackenzie,[37] arrived at Fort McKavett with F and" - don't need the comma, I don't think
  • "with policing during Reconstruction" - link Reconstruction
  • I don't think the marker image needs to be used twice. Maybe File:Fort McKavett HQ.jpg instead?
  • Maybe File:Fort McKavett Commander's house.jpg instead of the other ruins picture? It gives a somewhat better angle/scale
    • Used to replace the gallery along with the above suggested image. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 01:21, 8 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • 140 acres in the infobox doesn't seem to be anywhere else
  • May 17, 1968 date from the infobox doesn't seem to be cited anywhere

Looks good, that's all from me. Hog Farm Talk 22:31, 7 November 2021 (UTC)Reply