Talk:Debra Cheverino

Suggestions for the article

• What is an international conductor?
• Say what kind of music she makes in the lead, not hat there are not many woman conductors - which anybody knows.
• I commented out the socalled Biography section which should begin with where she was born to what kind of family/society. The other names are perhaps good for a footnote, and the quote should not be at the beginning, and translated, or makes no sense.
• The Early career has these things but in way too much detail. Compare other biographies. Say where she studied with whom when, that's encyclopedic. No more.
• The same goes for her early conducting. Please prune considerably, or I will.
• Every fact should come with inline citation to an independent source (not her website, not a manager, not private knowledge). Unsourced material should simply be removed.
• Absolutely say something about what she conducts, or at least this reader is left frustrated. - I was called (on my talk) by Atsme. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:21, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
• In the external links section, give the urls titles, as for references. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:26, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

Thanks, Gerda. I think it reads too much like a CV instead of a biography, and agree that it needs pruning. You know this topic much better than I, so please feel free to edit as you see fit. ^Atsme _Talk 📧 13:26, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

I have little time, so thought I first give the main author a chance first. I am no friend of article tags, because they discredit the information to a reader. Personal life - we could do without, why expand? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:59, 24 August 2020 (UTC)