Talk:Darmawan Mangunkusumo
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Theleekycauldron in topic Did you know nomination
 | A fact from Darmawan Mangunkusumo appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 26 December 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 22:25, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
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- ... that despite the governor-general being advised not to employ him, Darmawan Mangunkusumo kept his colonial government job? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Scanner Price Accuracy Code
- Comment: Could take advice on hook wording - the point is, the "boss" was told not to take him but ignored the advice
Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 16:19, 28 November 2021 (UTC).
| General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith - Interesting:
- Other problems:
- Rephrase suggested below
| QPQ: Done. |
Overall: 
I think the hook should be reworded, maybe
- ALT1: ... that the governor-general of Indonesia rejected the advice to not employ Darmawan Mangunkusumo in the colonial economic affairs department?
- ALT2: ... that the governor-general of Indonesia was advised to not employ Darmawan Mangunkusumo in the colonial economic affairs department, due to Mangunkusumo's political activities?
- ALT3: ... that Darmawan Mangunkusumo kept his colonial government job, even though the governor-general of Indonesia was advised to reject his employment?
@Juxlos: Please post below which one you think is best, or to suggest other hooks. Z1720 (talk) 20:03, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
- @Z1720: ALT3 works best, I think. Juxlos (talk) 02:06, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
ALT3 is prefered. Z1720 (talk) 04:35, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
