Talk:Danish Auxiliary Corps in the Williamite War in Ireland

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Djmaschek in topic B class review

Suggested Updates edit

Its an interesting topic:) so worth doing.

Requires Infobox;

Overly reliant on two sources (both from the 19th century);

Overly detailed in some areas eg we don't need blow by blow accounts of where they marched, sieges etc (those usually have their own articles) but under in others (eg their performance? background?); its hard for the reader to pick out the important bits;

Structure and grammar need work.

Robinvp11 (talk) 16:30, 18 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

B class review edit

@Creuzbourg: This looks like a very interesting and worthwhile article. After a quick scan, I can see there is one main issue. Please fix. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 03:53, 4 August 2022 (UTC)Reply