Talk:Colton Sissons

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

• "Predators American Hockey League" → "Predators' American Hockey League"  Done
• I really hate how adding "Canada" makes the infobox so wide, but I know that someone will add it back even if you or I remove that
  • Ditto. The worse is when someone is from PEI. It stretches it out so far.

Early life

• Comma after "North Vancouver, British Columbia" per MOS:GEOCOMMA  Done

Playing career

Amateur

• "forgo his NCAA eligibility by signing with them."  Done
• Comma after "Westside Warriors"  Done
• "Sissons'" → "Sissons's" per MOS:'S  Done
• Specify first year of NHL draft eligibility, since the junior clubs also do drafts  Done
• Comma after "for the 2012-13 season"  Done
• Link "Team Canada's national junior team" to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team  Done

Professional

• "Predators 2013" → "Predators' 2013"  Done
• Comma after "Admirals coach Dean Evason"  Done
• Link AHL All-Star Game  Done
• Link first instance of "rating" to plus-minus  Done
• Use some synonym in "His assist marked" to avoid repetition of "assist" in the sentence  Done
• "coaching chance" → "coaching change"  Done
• Link "captain" to Captain (ice hockey)  Done
• "Predators opening goal" → "Predators' opening goal"  Done
• "Predators organizations" → "Predators organization"  Done
• Comma after "for the 2016 Stanley Cup playoffs"  Done
• Link exhibition game  Done
• "Predators fourth-line" → "Predators' fourth-line"  Done
• Might want to clarify that this meant Sissons was exposed for the Knights to potentially take  Done
• No commas in "reached, at least, the 15-point mark"  Done
• Mention some sentence that he was invited to the bubble  Done
• "Nick Cousins' goal" → "Nick Cousins's goal" per MOS:'S  Done
• "Predaots" → "Predators"  Done
• "400th career NHL game with the Predators." We know that's the only team for which he's played  Done

Awards and honours

• Good

References

• Per MOS:ALLCAPS, [5] and [56] should be in title case  Done
• North Shore News, Kelowna Capital News, and The Tennessean should be work param, not publisher  Done
• Add "|url-access=limited" to the Tennessean refs  Done

General comments

• Images are properly licensed and relevant
• No stability concerns in the revision history
• Earwig score looks good, top result is a mirror site

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. As always, ping me with questions and let me know when you're finished. — GhostRiver 00:37, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

GhostRiver, done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:41, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for working so quickly, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 16:00, 18 January 2022 (UTC)