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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
- Maybe add a bit more about his major junior career to the lead.
Done - Add publishers to references. Done
- "and eventually tied his career high of single game assists with a five assist night in a win over the Kingston Frontenacs. During the team's 8–4 win, Thomas also tied the franchise record for most assists in a game" The franchise record should be mentioned earlier. Done
- For the infobox: His playing career should start at 2016 (First pro year if professional, first year of top level of amateur competition if amateur.) Done
- "Aside from school and hockey, Thomas also runs a clothing company called Zale Apparel with friend Ethan Low." This should be mentioned in the article. Done
- Awards and honours section needs a reference. Done
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:18, 12 April 2020 (UTC)