Talk:History of education in Wales before 1701
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Latest comment: 3 days ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 23:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
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- ... that Oliver Cromwell tried to educate the people of Wales?
Source: Jones, Gareth Elwyn; Roderick, Gordon Wynne (2003). History of Education in Wales. University of Wales Press. ISBN 978-0708318089. (pp. 17-20)
Improved to Good Article status by Llewee (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 12 past nominations.
Llewee (talk) 13:35, 26 September 2024 (UTC).
QPQ done, GA nom confirmed within date, article is good (refs, copyvio spotcheck, etc.). I do have some concerns about the hook, however, which might be a bit too bland, but more worrisome, I read it as a bit condescending to the "people of Wales". Perhaps another hook can be proposed (or a second opinion offered on the one here, if the nom would like to continue with it)? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:31, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Piotrus, it's not a great hook. A better one might be... Llewee (talk) 22:29, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that a clergyman from London established 87 schools in Wales in the 17th century?
I am fine with ALT1, although I'd suggest adding "already before 18th century" to it. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:29, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- I have added "in the 17th century". Llewee (talk) 13:17, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
