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National Film Award for Best Supporting Actress edit

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Nominator(s): Yashthepunisher (talk) 03:37, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Back at the FLC after a long hiatus. This is a complete well written/sourced list of the NFA supporting actress winners. Looking forward for constructive and helpful feedback. Yashthepunisher (talk) 03:37, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Ianblair23 (talk) 23:16, 3 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
:Hi Yashthepunisher my initial comments are below:
  • Infobox
  • Update last awarded to 2016
  • Update total awarded to 36
  • Lead
  • at India's National Film Awards correct link to National Film Awards
  • The most recent recipient is Zaira Wasim, who will be honoured at the 64th National Film Awards change to past tense now that Awards have been held.
  • cash prize of ₹50,000 (US$780) link Indian rupee and United States dollar, add links in infobox as well
  • presented a total of 33 Best Supporting Actress awards to 31 different actresses update
  • As of 2016 added Template:As of
  • and Kangna Ranaut are the three actresses correct link to Kangana Ranaut
Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 04:28, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Ianblair23: Thank you for your comments, I guess I have resolved them. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Yashthepunisher, thanks for making those changes, further comments are below:
  • Table
  • Images
  • References
Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 07:06, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Ianblair23: Done. Thanks for reviewing. Yashthepunisher (talk) 12:35, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Ianblair23 for your comments and support. Yashthepunisher (talk) 04:40, 4 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from BeatlesLedTV (talk) 05:40, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
;Comments from BeatlesLedTV
  • Center the Ref. column.
@BeatlesLedTV: Can you please be more specific here?
  • Change "Languages" → "Language(s)" as every film listed except one is only one language.
Done
  • Change "Recipient(s)" → "Recipient" as there's only one recipient for each film.
Done
  • Put a period at the end of the header.
Done
  • In the header, change role(s) & film(s) → role & film, respectively. Every actress has only one role & one film so having the extra "(s)"'s is unnecessary.
Done
  • In note a, put the reference after the period.
Done
  • Would it be possible to add a reference to the very last sentence in the lead?

That's all I got. Great job! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 16:40, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:34, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks much for your comment and support BeatlesLedTV. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:54, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment. This is a well-made list that meets the criteria. Just one concern: there were three instances of a tie, but the lead mentions only the first occurrence. My recommendation: to avoid unnecessarily bulking up the lead, we can simply state that were three ties in the history of the awards, in the years 1999, 2012, and 2013. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 09:05, 6 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Krimuk2.0: Is it okay now? Yashthepunisher (talk) 12:32, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Tweaked it a bit. Anyway, good job. I support it for promotion. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 15:36, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your comments and support Krimuk. :) Yashthepunisher (talk) 16:57, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

@The Rambling Man: I couldn't find any source to support the name. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:47, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Removed, since the award's name is not "Rajat Kamal" but its the hindi translation of the silver lotus given to the winners. Yashthepunisher (talk) 17:20, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • " It is presented by the President of India at a ceremony held in New Delhi." that's referenced to a single event that happened in 2015, has it always been the case, and was it the case in 2016?
For the past 10 years, the event has been happening in New Delhi, per the sources.
  • " the government of India has presented" I thought, more specifically, it was the DFF doing the presenting?
The DFF works under the I&B ministry, which itself is under the Government of India.
Yes, but it's the DFF who do the presenting. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:10, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Changed.
  • Could add a couple more images, indeed I've started adding images for each recipient in some of my more recent lists where a sufficient number exist.
Added image of the first recipient. I don't think adding image of everyone of them is necessary.
  • Any kind of third party coverage which puts this award into some context, i.e. how prominent an award it is?

That's all, very good. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:13, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Few third party sources are available. Yashthepunisher (talk) 17:06, 15 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have given it a good read and the list looks quite flawless especially after the previous reviews were resolved. I offer my Support for its promotion to FL.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 15:09, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments form Vedant
  • "the actresses whose performances have won awards have worked in one or more of eight major languages: Bengali, English, Hindi, Meitei, Marathi, Malayalam, Oriya, Tamil and Urdu." - this bit read a little awkward to me. Particularly because you say one of the eight languages but listed are nine languages. Also, in the list is a "Haryanvi" film. So that makes it ten? It's fairly confusing.
Rephrased the sentence and corrected the numbers.
  • Also, the reference for the same might be problematic. Is it solely for the "films made in over 20 languages" claim? If so, does the latter claim not need a reference? I mean obviously it's very fact based and we can simply count the languages but are we sure?
The first part of the sentence is sourced and the second part about 10 languages is pretty obvious to need a source.
  • The captions for Sikri and Sen's photographs can be more alike? You may want to add to Sikri's caption the other actress with the achievement?

The rest looks good. Fine work Yash, let me know if you any queries regarding my comments. NumerounovedantTalk 12:47, 26 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Numerounovedant: Done. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:26, 26 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I can​ Support this list. Good luck Yash! NumerounovedantTalk 20:20, 26 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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