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The article was promoted by FrB.TG via FACBot (talk) 23 October 2024 [1].

Can't Catch Me Now

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Nominator(s): NØ 15:42, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about Olivia Rodrigo's song "Can't Catch Me Now". Just two months after raking in massive critical acclaim with her second studio album, Guts, Rodrigo contributed this lush folk ballad to The Hunger Games: The Ballad of Songbirds & Snakes. The song, which consistently escalates in intensity throughout its duration, drew positive reviews for its sound and Rodrigo's vocal performance. Oscar buzz soon followed but the competition was unfortunately too tough. Thanks a lot to everyone who will take the time to give their feedback here.NØ 15:42, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pending review from NegativeMP1

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Soon. I hope... λ NegativeMP1 17:20, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry, but I'm not sure if I'm going to review this article anymore following some real-world developments. I'm also unsure if I am currently in the right place to determine what meets FA criteria or not. If something like a spotcheck or an image review is needed, let me know in a couple weeks and I might volunteer. But I don't think I will be reviewing the article prose. I wish you luck, and I'll try to make up for it at a later date. λ NegativeMP1 17:55, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support from Pbritti

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Somehow this song from her discography had escaped my notice until now, so this review gives me an excuse to throw it on. Will complete in the next 24 hours. ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:47, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pbritti: Since it has been a week, I thought I'd send a reminder. But please take your time :) NØ 17:59, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I haven't forgotten! Expect comments tomorrow UTC (for real this time!). ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:01, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Is the link Music critics in the lead and §Critical reception overlink? Since music criticism generally is not a matter of discussion here, I think it is.
  • "ubiquitousness" is a good word, but I fear it might not be clear in meaning to a general audience. Perhaps replace with "constant presence" or "inescapable presence" depending on context.
  • "For her debut studio album" While I appreciate that Rodrigo's career is still in a comparatively nascent stage, I think that discussion of genres from her debut studio album is off topic and should only be mentioned if a source makes a connection between the "Can't Catch Me Now" and that debut (the current citation is from 2021, so there's an NOR concern, too).
  • "returned as her principal collaborator on the follow-up album" The citations for this date to September 2023 and appear to make no reference to the subject. While this could be BLUESKY, I'm inclined by NOR towards asking for a source that explicitly draws a link between the subject song and Nigro's work on Guts.
  • Mentioning that a producer was a frequent collaborator of an artist is standard practice for Background sections. "Out of the Woods" mentions the producer's prior work with Taylor Swift, for example. An example of a NOR violation would be a statement like "Can't Catch Me Now was conceived during the Guts sessions". Guts and its success were mentioned in several articles announcing the subject song, like this, this, and this, so the article would be incomplete without discussion of Nigro's involvement in it.--NØ 17:27, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reliable sources determine the details that comprise complete coverage, so I would like an RS cite here that engages with this relationship as a continuity with Guts. Otherwise, it could be considered as unnecessarily emphasizing Nigro's relationship with Rodrigo's work. ~ Pbritti (talk) 19:46, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Apologies for having to push back on this, but that is not how NOR is applied to background sections based on my experience at FAC. If you see articles like Laundromat (song), even CD liner notes are referenced to provide information on previous collaborations between writers of a song. We cannot nix a project that the two collaborators released together just two months before this song. That part is staying.--NØ 20:19, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The album was released to critical acclaim" We probably don't need this regarding Guts for NOR and PUFF reasons, especially without a direct link to "Can't Catch Me Now" in the sources
  • This is not a NOR violation since the album receiving critical acclaim is a widely held opinion by secondary sources and is cited. Not really PUFF either since that guideline refers to exceptional claims in wikivoice, e.g. "Mariah Carey is widely regarded as the best vocalist of all-time". An album with a metascore of 91 and six Grammy nominations being referred to as acclaimed is standard fare imo.--NØ 17:27, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why are we mentioning this critical acclaim at all, though? It's a sentence that has zero bearing on article's subject and utilizes a reference that makes no mention of "Can't Catch Me Now". It's unnecessary glossing. Nix it. ~ Pbritti (talk) 19:46, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • It complements readers' understanding of the critical reception for this song, which is covered later. Comments like it marking "one more step towards Rodrigo's world domination", it representing a change in her sound, or forming an earnest addition to her discography are better understood when not divorced from how her prior output was received.--NØ 20:19, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is there any non-primary RS information available on the vinyl release? This made me wonder if there's some missing angle to coverage here, but I'm struggling to find any additional content on the 7". Will report back if I have more success with a little more time spent.
  • I'm aware, but I linked to it as a possible aspect of the subject that has gone unrepresented in the current article, particularly when the article lacks reference to any secondary source on the 7". ~ Pbritti (talk) 19:46, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Subjects that were not reported on by reliable secondary sources should be unrepresented in the article. Usage of unreliable sources as a reference would constitute a violation of the FA criteria.--NØ 20:19, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and chamber-folk ballad," The comma here seems to serve primarily as an anchor for the citations that follow and not as an appropriate grammatical device.
  • Thank you for attributing quotes and reviews to the writers rather than their publications. It's infuriating to look at some FAs and GAs see stuff like "the New York Times positively reviewed the song"–no they didn't! A specific critic did! Anyhow, thanks for getting that right.

Will return with additional comments shortly, but my spot-checking of sources is also yielding positive results besides the issues mentioned above. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:26, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, Pbritti. I look forward to it.--NØ 17:27, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm inclined towards an oppose now, unfortunately. I am especially concerned by the repeated preference to defer to the precedence of individual articles over policy and misunderstanding of my question of whether an element of the subject has been adequately covered. (I am not asking you to cite the article I linked and stated that; I am asking you to tell me if there are RSs that do cover it.) This is exacerbated by the apparent willingness to overlink to comply with a GA request. These are minor requests with a policy basis, so please make them. ~ Pbritti (talk) 23:52, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That is disappointing, since other FAs have been pointed out as examples that your interpretation of policies is not shared by the larger community or the precedent here at FAC. I cannot remove important details from the article due to one user's unpopular interpretation of a guideline. I am not sure how else I am supposed to state this to make it clearer, but no, there aren't any RS that cover the "angle" in the student newspaper you have linked. But thanks for your feedback anyways and happy editing.--NØ 05:33, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Addressed at NORN. No further concerns. The article is well written and the citations are strong. I would reckon it among the best song articles on the project. Support. ~ Pbritti (talk) 14:58, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review from Sky Harbor

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I was asked to review the article on WP:DISCORD, and at first glance the prose looks good. Maybe a couple of errors here or there but otherwise written well. In honor of Olivia Rodrigo's Guts World Tour and it stopping in the Philippines (and also because she's Filipino American and it's Filipino American History Month), I will endeavor to review this more deeply and will post some thoughts on the article later depending on my real-life workload. --Sky Harbor (talk) 16:24, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, MaranoFan. Thank you very much for taking the time to write this article, and I'm glad that you had taken the time to write it. For this review, I will focus primarily on prose and writing, deferring to others more versed in the current FA process than me for more technical aspects:
  • In the first sentence of the composition and lyrics section, I would include that Dylan Waterhouse plays the instruments you mention in the next sentence ("..., who also plays..."). In the current arrangement I am left wondering who "he" is.
  • In the music video section, is the "white sleek dress" a specific dress, or is it a white dress that happens to be slimming?
  • I personally write out numbers as words so long as it's ten or below ("Ten days later" instead of "10 days later"), but I get that this is a stylistic choice.
As I mentioned initially, the prose itself is written well so I don't see any major impediments to the article becoming an FA, and I think the suggestions made here would push that case even further. Best of luck. --Sky Harbor (talk) 14:22, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Many thanks for reviewing this and the nice words, Sky Harbor. Done on points one and two.--NØ 05:34, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Great! I appreciate the edits made and I am glad to vote Support for this nomination. --Sky Harbor (talk) 22:02, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • "which intersperses scenes from The Hunger Games: The Ballad of Songbirds & Snakes with clips of Rodrigo singing it in a cabin and a grass field" => "which intersperses scenes from The Hunger Games: The Ballad of Songbirds & Snakes with clips of Rodrigo singing the song in a cabin and a grass field"
  • "On November 1, 2023, Rodrigo's hotline" - what's her "hotline"?

Image and source review - pass

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Image licencing, rationales and placement seem OK to me. The sample needs an ALT text. Sources look pretty mainstream but I wonder why some have archives and others don't. What makes Qobuz a reliable source? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 07:23, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This sample does not contain video so it does not need ALT text. TimedText is already present. All sources should now have archives except the singlechart templates, as there does not currently exist a way of adding archives to them. Qobuz is just a music store and streaming service which is used for credits since Tidal went behind a paywall. The information about credits is provided to them by the record label when songs are published there. In the case of this song, it matches the vinyl booklet (hard to read). Do the reviews pass now, Jo-Jo Eumerus?--NØ 10:14, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 13:23, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Going to qualify that Pbritti's concerns above are not overridden by my review of the sources, though. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 07:51, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Query for the coordinators

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@FAC coordinators: Since this is almost down to older nominations, would it be okay for me to put up another one? My schedule has changed a bit due to starting a job and I would only have time to attend to comments on a new nomination during the weekends (aka the next few days).--NØ 04:10, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, it would. FrB.TG (talk) 05:02, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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