User talk:Phill24th/Archive 1

DYK nomination of Šupelka

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DYK/The Jungle Book (1967 film)

Hi Phill, I think you missed that this is a "Good Article" Victuallers (talk) 14:30, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

DYK for Šupelka

The DYK project (nominate) 16:07, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

• Nice work on the page. J04n(talk page) 19:22, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, thanks! Really appreciate your consideration. Phill24th (talk) 19:25, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

DYK for Standing Up in the Milky Way

The DYK project (nominate) 00:02, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

Good work

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		For your article creations of Šupelka and Standing Up in the Milky Way. I look forward to your future content submissions. SilverserenC 03:13, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

Template:Did you know nominations/Monastery of San Isidro de Loriana

Please check my comments on the DYK captioned. You mistakenly commented that the article is too short. However it is 5292 characters long. EagerToddler39 (talk) 17:31, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

DYK for Kemane

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Question about Kemane

Can you confirm that it is made out of maize? Can that be right? Geogene (talk) 20:15, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

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Speedy deletion declined: Yiling Senior High School

Hello Phill24th. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Yiling Senior High School, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Might want to change to PROD or AfC. Certainly needs sources, but CSD A7 is improper as it does not cover schools. Thank you. Alexf^(talk) 21:56, 29 March 2014 (UTC)

About New way to filter light

This page should not be speedily deleted because This page is about technical subject about which people or mainly the students should know. most of the people work on and search information on this website so I think this is the best platform for this page. I will try to modify this page as I will get more information about it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ravindra Zemse (talk • contribs) 20:10, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

Orphaned non-free media (File:Cosmos S1E1 - Standing Up in the Milky Way.png)

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DYK nomination of So Long, It's Been Good to Know Yuh

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Talk about a fast review! I was just posting my own DYK and noticed yours. Best, Yoninah (talk) 21:19, 5 April 2014 (UTC)

Possibly unfree File:Kemane, Macedonian folk instrument sample, audio recording.ogg

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DYK for So Long, It's Been Good to Know Yuh

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Notice of Edit warring noticeboard discussion

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Your GA nomination of Standing Up in the Milky Way

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DYK for Pete Hampton

Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 07:33, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Hazrat khuwaja Muhammad zaman luari sharif

Hello Phill24th. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Hazrat khuwaja Muhammad zaman luari sharif, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Not vandalism. Thank you. — Malik Shabazz ^Talk/_Stalk 17:33, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Yes, OK. I can see that now, my mistake. Sorry, and thank you for declining it.Phill24th (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Yes I am working on it. As this was my 1st article so I am facing little bit difficulty in improving it. But I will improve it and if I need help, I will ask you :) Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ubed junejo (talk • contribs) 19:32, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Hi I am Ubed Junejo As article Hazrat Khawaja Muhammad Zaman Luari Sharif represents a Sindhi Sufi poet so all material regarding him is in either Sindhi language or in Urdu language. In fact nothing about him has ever been published in English. So references or citations given in article are from books or web pages in Sindhi or Urdu. If you can not read or understand these languages you can contact any other Pakistani editor/contributor to verify the sources. Kind Regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ubed junejo (talk • contribs) 12:22, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

@Ubed Junejo: Non-English sources are allowed on Wikipedia, however because this is the English-language Wikipedia, English-language sources are preferred over non-English ones according to guidelines. As with sources in English, if a dispute arises involving a citation to a non-English source, editors may request that a quotation of relevant portions of the original source be provided, either in text, in a footnote, or on the article talk page. Also, when quoting non-English sources, a translation into English should always accompany the quote. And most important is that you don't violate copyright material (see: fair use text). What mostly matters is that all claims are sourced according to the referencing criteria and style. Phill24th (talk) 12:34, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Dear Phill24th: I am providing you with original source material with its English translation and information about where these sources are cited. You can then verify that translation using Google or Bing transaltor. Then kindly add that source material and its English translation where ever you find suitable. Thanks--Ubed junejo (talk) 12:56, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

@ Phill24th: میان محمد زمان: یے مشھور مرشد میان ابوالقاسم نقشبندی اور میان محمد نقشبندی ٹھٹوی کے مرید تھے۔ بڑے باھدایت اور سلسلہ نقشبندی کے مرشد اور بزرگ تھے۔ بدین کے قریب لواری مین سکونت پذیر رھے اور ایک دنیا کو اپنے فیض سے سیراب کرتے رھے۔ لا تعداد لوگون کا خیال ھے کے وہ اپنے زمانے مین بینظیر تھے۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔۱۱۸۸ھ مین رحلت پائ۔ (Reference no. 2: https://archive.org/stream/Tuhfat-ul-kiramurduTranslation/00444_Tuhfat-ul-Kiram-ur#page/n593/mode/2up) English translation: Mr Muahammd Zaman: This famous mentor and spiritual guide was disciple of Mr Abul Qasim Naqshbandi and Mr Muhammad Naqshbandi Thattwi. He was an enlightened mentor and guide of Naqshabandi sect of sufism. He lived in Luwari near Badin Sindh. Benefited masses of people through his knowledge and wisdom. Many people think that he was very distinguished and unmatched in his time. He died in 1188 H. --Ubed junejo (talk) 13:29, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

@ Phill24th: (Ref: no. 3: https://archive.org/details/SharahAbyatSindhi)

هڪ مشهور روايت موجب هڪ دف عي شاه عبدال طيف ڀٽائ لواري اآيو، جتي خواج ا محمد زمان سان ملاقات ڪ يائين۔

English translation: According to a famous legend Shah Abdul Latif Bhittai once came to Luwari and met with Khawaja Muhammad Zaman. --Ubed junejo (talk) 14:00, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, OK. The references are fine, don't have to post them here, the article's talk would be a better place to get an opinion.Phill24th (talk) 14:03, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Hi Dear Phill24th, If I need to cite a source which has already been used for citation in the same article then should it be named again ? or waht? Please guide me in this regard. Kind regards --Ubed junejo (talk) 20:55, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

Hi dear Phill24th Please have a look on the article "Khawaja Muhammad Zaman Luari" now. Kindly do not forget to give your valuable suggestions. Kind regards --Ubed junejo (talk) 01:18, 30 May 2014 (UTC)

@Ubed junejo: Yes, the page looks good. Just a few more references, maybe arrange it so that every claim is referenced (note that you can use a single reference several times), and you should probably name the second reference in the list because it's just a link. After that you can remove the "ref improve" template, the article'll look great. Thank you for searching my advice, kind regards - Phill24th (talk) 19:53, 3 June 2014 (UTC).

Your GA nomination of Standing Up in the Milky Way

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Speedy deletion declined: John Payne Jackson

Hello Phill24th, and thanks for patrolling new pages! I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of John Payne Jackson, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Easily passes WP:A7 in current form. You may wish to review the Criteria for Speedy Deletion before tagging further pages. Thank you. -- GB fan 22:54, 3 April 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, OK. Thanks for the message. - Phill24th (talk). 12:55, 4 April 2015 (UTC)

Battle of Kumansovo

See the talk page, which i was in the process of editing while you reverted and sent me that message. By the way, threatening to report people (especially seasoned editors) for good faith edits is rather uncivil behavior. If you had bothered to read the edit summary you would have seen my rational.XavierGreen (talk) 22:53, 9 May 2015 (UTC)

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Please comment on Talk:2015 Kumanovo shootings

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2015 Kumanovo shootings

PROCITAJ JA STATIJATA USTE EDNAS MEGJU PRVITE CETVORICA SE MUMAHMED KRASNIQI, SAMI UKSINI I DEME SEHU. 19999o

@19999o: toa samo po azbucen red. - Phill24th (talk). 09:27, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

ABE OVIE STO TI GI KAZAV NELI OD MVR BEA POSOCENI KAKO LIDERI I UTVRDENO E DEKA SE MEGU UAPSENITE. - 19999o (talk). 11:40, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

@19999o: Da, da, samo sho go najdov izvorot od MVR. Sega ke go klam vo statijata. - Phill24th (talk). 09:44, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

Gošince attack

You cut-pasted. You should fix it per Wikipedia guidelines.--Zoupan 11:20, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

 Comment: I agree with Zoupan here. The article is at Gošince attack while the talk page is at Talk:Gosince attack the 'older' spelling, without aceent on the s. Please see wp:How to fix cut-and-paste moves. (same as Zoupan has linked above) 220 of ^Borg 02:31, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

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Kumanovo shootings

Re your part(?) revert of my edit there, you really think this is better? I don't agree, you have re-introduced some inconsistencies in date styles i.e. DMY versus MDY etc. And what does "... with full suppression and elimination of the group" mean? Excessively wordy at best. "During the shootings.. " etc etc. Whoever wrote this is apparently not a native English speaker.

"A shootout which erupted during a police raid between police forces and an armed group identifying as the National Liberation Army occurred on 9 May 2015 in the northern Macedonian town of Kumanovo"

Awful first sentence, which you reverted to. A few missing commas at least. I had:

"During a police raid on 9 May 2015, a shootout erupted between Macedonian police forces and an armed group identifying as the National Liberation Army (NLA) in the northern Republic of Macedonia town of Kumanovo."

It is standard practise to have acronyms at the first use of a term i.e. National Liberation Army (NLA), but you removed that. Please take a closer look at what else I 'fixed'. How about this?:

"The Kumanovo shootings were a shootout [or gun battle] that occurred on 9 to 10 May 2015 in Kumanovo city, Republic of Macedonia. It occurred between Macedonian police forces and an armed group identifying itself as the National Liberation Army (NLA)."

"gun battle" or similar is optional, "shootout" may be a bit POV, unless thats what the source says.

  Sorry if above comes across a bit 'crabby', I actually wrote it over 12 hours ago after a day of very little sleep. Then I had a 'keyboard nap', woke up about 4 AM and 'hibernated' my PC without saving the message to Wikipedia! Regards, 220 of ^Borg 02:17, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

• Yeah, man, thank you for reaching me. All I can say, is, your lead just didn't roll off the tongue as the previous did, I read two "during"s at the start of the first two sentences and it didn't look nice. But, anyway, if you'll fix it per those standard practices, by all means, please do. I have nothing against fixing the lead. -. 02:31, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

I didn't notice the two 'durings', I'll take another look. (But I see the lead has been changed since last night.) Somebody though thought enough of it to basically copy it to the Kumanovo page! See here.

• Oh dear, I just had a quick look at the recent edit history, this is quite a 'busy' and controversial page! A lot of back and forth POV editing it appears. I must say that I had heard nothing of this event in Australia, at least on the radio, my TV is broken at the moment!

• Query, was this event a series of shootings / gun battles, as the title implies that, but it's not obvious to me.220 of ^Borg 04:37, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

• Well, it was an organized police raid in order to stop a potential terrorist organization that has been collecting weapons within the country, most probably to attack state institutions and/or public events, but the armed group wouldn't let go without a fight. The internet is flooded with news for the event. By the way, do you mean that the Kumanovo or the shootings page is controversial? - Phill24th (talk). 09:09, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

I meant Kumanovo shootings is 'controversial'. The number of killed keep getting changed (10 or 14) for example. 220 of ^Borg 12:47, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

Yeah. Not really sure why that happens, I seriously can't find any souces regarding it. But, I dont think that makes the article controversial. As far as I see it, those were vandal edits, reverted. - Phill24th (talk). 14:02, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Paul Singer (businessman)

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Re: Some balaklava for you

No problem. —Славянский патриот (talk) 21:46, 17 May 2015 (UTC)