NMDP

Content in Lead

Content in Lead (names of people he toured with) needs to be expanded upon - and referenced - in the body of the article. David notMD (talk) 09:54, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Oh I get it--I need to do a sub-head for each point in the lead. Thank you for commenting. NMDP (talk) 14:25, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

In Touring, I converted the red Wikilinks to blue by moving the italics marks to outside the double brackets [[ ]]. However, a question - do you mean to indicate that Erik is credited as personnel on those albums? Because when looking at the articles on each album, he is not listed as a performer on all of them. If you meant specifically that he was touring with her from 1998 to whenever, then the albums should not be listed and instead what is needed is a reference describing him as touring with her. David notMD (talk) 20:10, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Yes I agree. I only linked to the wiki pages of each album because they are available. I am also looking for credible external links that show him on tour for each one, but that has been difficult so far. If it is in fact impossible, I will change this section to just the general statement that he toured with her for many years with a credible reference showing that. Thank you for fixing the links. NMDP (talk) 21:28, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Erik Della Penna (April 13)

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Drmies (talk) 21:37, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for looking at the article and for your comments. I didn't expect it to be reviewed so quickly, so I was in the middle of making changes with another editor when you viewed it! I will endeavor to resolve all the issues you have pointed out. NMDP (talk) 14:21, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Erik Della Penna (April 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheChineseGroundnut was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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@T.C.G. [talk] 21:54, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments and for pointing out the "sources" links. They were very helpful. NMDP (talk) 21:41, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Erik Della Penna has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Erik Della Penna. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 17:14, 22 April 2024 (UTC)