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Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr. Asit Choksi (August 4)

Latest comment: 6 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The article reads like a resume rather than an encyclopaedic article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Dr. Asit Choksi and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Dan arndt (talk) 17:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Mechtildd! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dan arndt (talk) 17:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr. Asit Choksi (August 6)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Firstly Dr. is not part of the individuals name the article should be title Asit Choksi not Dr. Asit Choksi.

Secondly with the inclusion of non-relevant information in lists (such as memberships, affiliations, appointments etc) is still reads like a resume. Thirdly phrases such as "passed examination on the first attempt", "observed that hospitals were progressively more ‘big business’ oriented, with financial targets and budgets increasingly placed as a priority over patient care" , "his primary goal is not to make money, but to ensure the best available care was delivered to his patients at an affordable cost" and "Dr. Choksi is constantly looking for new ways to expand the company for benefit of both physicians and patients alike" are highly self-promotional and clearly not objective.

Finally there is some extremely close para-phrasing of some of the sources - which are bordering on copyright violations.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Dan arndt (talk) 00:54, 6 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asit J. Choksi (August 6)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gbawden was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Reads like a resume

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Asit J. Choksi and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Asit J. Choksi, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Gbawden (talk) 10:32, 6 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asit J. Choksi (August 7)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from http://www.texienneoncologycenters.com/history/, http://www.texienneoncologycenters.com/about-us/. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure. Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the instructions here.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Asit J. Choksi may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Nosebagbear (talk) 13:10, 7 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Duplicate submssions

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Please do not create duplicate drafts of the same article. If one draft has been declined, another nearly identical copy of it will also be declined. Please work to improve your original draft instead, using Wikipedia's notability criteria and biographies of living persons guidelines for guidance. Thank you. --Drm310 🍁 (talk) 15:53, 7 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: ASLIRI.ID (August 25)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kpgjhpjm was:

The submission appears to be written in 1. This is the English Language Wikipedia; we can only accept articles written in the English Language. Please provide a high-quality English Language translation of your submission. Otherwise, you may write it in the 1 Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Kpg jhp jm 10:14, 25 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:ASLIRI.ID has a new comment

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:ASLIRI.ID. Thanks! Kpg jhp jm 10:14, 25 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asit J. Choksi (October 23)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by K.e.coffman were:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please review WP:COI.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Asit J. Choksi and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Asit J. Choksi, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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K.e.coffman (talk) 05:54, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:ASLIRI.ID

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, Mechtildd. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "ASLIRI.ID".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. DannyS712 (talk) 08:55, 2 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Asit J. Choksi

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, Mechtildd. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Asit J. Choksi".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 12:55, 18 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

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