LisaLW
Joined 12 October 2010
Latest comment: 13 years ago by DragonflySixtyseven in topic Holistic Marketing
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Holistic Marketing
editI have undeleted the article, and put it in your userspace again - User:LisaLW/Holistic marketing.
Reading through the article, it does not read as a proper encyclopedia article, more like a dictionary entry. I found it really difficult to read and did not really get what it was about. I would suggest you try and rewrite it in a more encyclopedia style, and maybe you can find some specialists in a suitable WikiProject (see Wikipedia:WikiProject for a list) who can help you with the article.
I hope this helps. --Dirk Beetstra T C 15:39, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah. Essentially, it's not a question of whether we should have an article about the subject, as it is a question of whether we should have that as an article about the subject. DS (talk) 15:41, 24 November 2010 (UTC)