Talk:Zone of the Enders: The 2nd Runner

Kaneko?

Should it be mentioned that Kazuma Kaneko designed both Lloyd and Inhert? --Sfida 00:11, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

Cleanups

Rearranged the sections and refined subsection headers. Lyrics were removed, since they really just took up space. I left a link in its place to an accurate transliteration. There should be a brief Plot section at the top, but I don't have enough resources (nor recent game memory) right now with which to write it. --Crisu 07:52, 23 April 2006 (UTC)

Rare game

Shouldn't someone list that this is a very hard game to come by. I heard they onlymade 5000 copies of the U.S. version of the game. Is this true? Big Boss 0 22:15, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Too Much Plot

The plot section for this game as of right now (September 23 2007) is WAY too large. The plot section literality takes up 2/3 of the article. Its way too large for any article let alone compared to the other stuff on this page. Also the gameplay seems overly neglected as it only takes up about 2 paragraphs compared to the endless amount of plot, character, and Mecha summaries. Someone needs to fix it (I would but I don’t know much about this game).--66.176.63.70 15:20, 23 September 2007 (UTC)

It's also poorly written. The vocabulary and grammar is horrible, and it's like 5000 paragraphs long. ShinraiTS4 (talk) 10:10, 23 November 2007 (UTC)

ZOE3

Sequel section in the article needs citation. --Karim666 (talk) 23:13, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

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Copyedits

Restored the following:

• If there's going to be a large released date list, make it collapsible.
• How are TGS game announcements significant enough for the lead? Does Mars not have a release window?
  • Moving TGS info likely fixes the {{Lead extra info}} issue.
  • Merged final lead paragraph since the subject of sequels, ports, etc is covered above it. Also, four paragraphs is a bit much considering the subject.
• "next-gen surround sound" is not in the source provided. [1]

« Ryūkotsusei » 03:09, 3 September 2018 (UTC)