Talk:Vivo (Luis Miguel album)

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
Good articleVivo (Luis Miguel album) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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BetacommandBot 02:23, 7 November 2007 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:32, 10 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • of the second leg of Amarte Es Un Placer Tour. → add "his" before the tour's title
  • in a live audio CD format, DVD, and VHS format → in a live audio CD, DVD and VHS format
  • were released as singles for the album → state "made available" here to avoid word repetition
  • On its release → After its release
  • link "critics" to Music journalism
  • Miguel received several accolades including a Grammy → comma before "including"
  • certified triple platinum+gold → certified triple Platinum and Gold

Infobox

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  • You need a more appropriate alt text for the cover where you describe what the user can see in the picture given

Background and release

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  • Place the audio sample on the left in the first paragraph
  • live covers of "Y" and "La Bikina". → specify that these are her singles
  • while the video album launched on → while the video album was launched on
  • It is first Spanish-language live album → place "the" before "first"
  • "La Bikina" was released as the lead single → say "was made available" here to avoid word repeition
  • with Mexican Independence Day → "the" before "Mexican..."
  • It peaked at two → you need to say "number two"

Critical reception

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  • On its release, Vivo → After its release
  • state that the reviews were written by music critics and link them to Music journalism
  • Please link AllMusic to its respective article and fix "Allmusic" to AllMusic in the reviews box
  • and the mariachi songs. Torres concluded: "Miguel's → and the mariachi songs, concluding: "Miguel's
  • Year of release for MTV Unplugged in brackets
  • Same for El Alma al Aire
  • Same for Paulina

Commercial performance

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  • Year of release for Mi Reflejo in brackets
  • platinum → Platinum
  • never shorten out United States to US; write "America" here to avoid word repetition
  • link Recording Industry Association of America
  • ninth bestselling → ninth best-selling
  • In Argentina, Vivo debuted on the top → In Argentina, Vivio debuted atop the
  • double platinum → double Platinum
  • while the video received platinum certification → while the video received a Platinum certification
  • triple platinum → triple Platinum
  • the album was certified triple platinum+gold → the record was awarded Platinum and Gold
  • a gold certification → a Gold certification

Track listing

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  • flawless ;)

Charts

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  • Fixed things here by myself

Certifications

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  • flawless ;)

Personnel

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  • Section should be placed before "Track listing"
  • Well, I think the section is not needed; I mean, there are only two credited persons which are already included in the article's body

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify the books, so I trust you with this!)
  • No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

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  On hold for 7 days! Great job, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:27, 10 June 2017 (UTC) Hey Cartoon network freak, I believe I've fixed all the issues you brought up. Just a couple things, I didn't understood what you meant by "specify that these are her singles". I assumed you meant to mention that both songs were released as singles from the album so I added that. Is the alt fine? I hard trouble coming up with a proper description so I did the best I could with it. And I agree with removing the personnel section. The only reason I made it a section is because I was hoping I could find the album booklet online, as I do not actually own it, and spot more personnels. But I couldn't find it so that's why I agree with your statement. Thanks for the review Cartoon network freak. If you ever need a Latin song article reviewed for GA, just let me know! Thanks again! Erick (talk) 20:13, 10 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

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