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Relevance? edit
"she was sent to various city hotels dressed in European style clothes to entertain [mostly Arab customers], for 180 rupees per night until at last a hotel manager reported her to the police."
I added the emphasis. Where is the source for this info? More importantly, what relevance does this have with the article? It sounds like this was meant to be a covert diatribe, I'm positively sure nobody gathered statistical data on the nationality of the molesters/rapists; I'll take off "mostly Arab", somebody should come up with a better sentence structure later. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 195.229.241.182 (talk • contribs).
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"Wheelchair-bound" edit
"Wheelchair-bound"/"confined to a wheelchair" is considered derogatory usage and should not be reintroduced into the article. Please see List of disability-related terms with negative connotations before reverting this change again. --Rahaeli (talk) 14:45, 18 December 2009 (UTC)
- See my comments here. Nsaa (talk) 15:00, 18 December 2009 (UTC)
Please change interview link edit
The interview link for Sharon Maas' website is wrong (I am Sharon Maas). It links to my main page. It should link to the following page: http://www.sharonmaas.com/#!Child Prostitution in India/c1ygl I tried to edit it myself but it did not work. Sorry for the inconvenience, was just trying to help but not enough editing experience!