Talk:Sopiko Guramishvili

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sportsfan77777 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


I think this one has been sitting in the queue for long enough! — GhostRiver 14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Infobox and lede edit

Early life and background edit

  • WL the first instance of Georgia (country)
    • MOS:OVERLINK discourages linking countries. I usually only link countries once in the infobox (as I did with the Netherlands). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces that they weren't using" → "After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces not being used"
  • Change note [a] so that it reads "with a score of 7 points in 11 games (7/11), and the note just explains that a win is one point, a draw is 1/2, and a loss is 0
  • On that note, please add a citation to the note explaining how scoring works; it seems common sense, but if it must be explained in the article, then it should be cited.

Chess career edit

2002-06 edit

  • Write out and WL the first instance of the Fédération Internationale des Échecs (FIDE)
  • "starting at 2142" → "ranked at 2142"
    • It's a rating, not a ranking. (I didn't want to write "rated at 2142" to avoid repeating "rating" in the sentence.)
  • "At the former in Budva in Montenegro, she earned a bronze medal" → "She earned a bronze medal at the former tournament in Budva, Montenegro,"
  • "but losing to the winner Ding" (you already mentioned that Ding won)
  • "with a good performance" → "with a strong performance"
  • Can you name the winners for the Georgian championship?
  • "Guramishvili had a strong finish to the year at the World Youth Chess Championships," → "Guramishvili finished the year with a redeeming performance at the World Youth Chess Championships,"

2007-09 edit

  • "Guramishvili consolidated her 2006 World Championship gold medal with another excellent year in 2007" → "Guramishvili followed up her gold medal-winning year with another impressive run of tournaments in 2007"
    • Changed to "an excellent year" if that was what you were getting at?
  • Duplicate "Georgian" in the first sentence of the second paragraph
  • "Later in the year in May" → "That May"

2010-13 edit

  • "due to her opponents having a much higher average rating of 2492." → "as she had faced opponents with a much higher average rating of 2492."
  • Reference [43] does not mention that Guramishvili and Giri eventually married
  • "in November" → "that November"
  • "was only sufficient for joint fourth place" → "was only strong enough for joint fourth place"
    • Changed to "only put her in joint fourth place".
  • "an joint first-place finish" → "a joint first-place finish"
  • Comma after "Femenino Ciudad De Linares"
  • Comma after "Chennai Open in India"

2014-present edit

Playing style edit

  • Good

Personal life edit

References edit

  • Archive all references using the tool
    • I tried using the tool, but couldn't get it to work. You are welcome to do it if it works for you. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:48, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

General comments edit

  • All three pictures are Creative Commons licensed and are relevant to the article
  • No stability issues in the revision history
  • Earwig copyvio score looks fantastic at 2.9%!

Putting on hold now to allow nominator to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. — GhostRiver 14:38, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

I made one change myself to eliminate MOS:PUFFERY. Apart from that, it looks good. Passing now. — GhostRiver 01:14, 10 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for doing the review, GhostRiver! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:42, 10 September 2021 (UTC)Reply