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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 20:43, 9 January 2020 (UTC)
I'll have a look at this. Give me a couple of days. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:43, 9 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Gog the Mild: Cheers for picking this one up. Just a note that at the moment I'm not planning to take this one beyond GA: I don't have access to either of the books which deal with it specifically (which are both listed in the Further reading section.) Harrias talk 11:04, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
Okey-dokey. Ouch! Barrès-Baker at over £50!
- Yeah. Both books are available in Reading Central Library, but the cost of getting there would be roughly equivalent! Harrias talk 09:27, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
- "File:Map of Redding by John Speed, 1611.jpg" needs a US PD tag.
- "File:Robert Devereux, 3rd Earl of Essex.jpg" needs a UK PD tag; and its source is dead.
- Ditchfield: page numbers? And the title should be in title case.
- Johnson: title case please.
- "Feilding held to the conditions of the truce" I realise that this is the lead, but as a reader doesn't know what the conditions were that Feilding was holding to, they are liable to be confused. Perhaps 'Feilding held to the truce'?
- Background: Maybe a couple of sentences setting the scene re which war this was etc. You can probably cut and paste from somewhere.
- Adapted what I used in Capture of Wakefield and elsewhere. Harrias talk 09:27, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
- Fine.
- Adapted what I used in Capture of Wakefield and elsewhere. Harrias talk 09:27, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
- "between the two military strongholds" Optional: "the" → 'these'.
- "the town had only minimal defences" Delete "only"?
- "For the construction of the defences, Aston forced civilians from the town to work alongside his soldiers, and was described by Basil Morgan, his biographer in the Oxford Dictionary of National Biography, as "bullying his soldiers and the citizenry alike". Optional: I can live with this at GA, but it could be better phrased.
- "Although the proposals were far less than previously made by parliament" Far less what?
- "the Parliamentarians had setup their artillery" "setup" → 'set up'.
- "had thereafter had to fight as a volunteer" What status did a "volunteer" have during the Civil War? Was he still an officer?
Would you like me to archive your web links?
Your usual excellent job. Gog the Mild (talk) 21:03, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Gog the Mild: Thanks for the review. Have responded to each point above. Harrias talk 09:27, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
Another fine article. Happy to promote. FAC will just have to wait until you win the lottery. (Unless your local library can get the books on inter-library loan.) Gog the Mild (talk) 10:29, 15 January 2020 (UTC)
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