Talk:Shintaido

Latest comment: 9 years ago by ISC-dlo in topic Citations

Difficult one this

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This is quite a difficult martial art to write an article about, as it has some martial applications, but is based upon using psychic energy to defeat an opponent. Dessydes

Perhaps, but the article is in absurdly bad shape as things stand. I saw it on "Mind, Body & Kickin' Moves" (where it came across as psychobabble nonsense) and looked it up here to find gibberish. Can a acknowledgeable practitioner improve it? JJL (talk) 03:53, 8 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

Well then, there's my challenge. Shintaido is certainly not psychobabble nonsense, and it doesn't use psychic energy to defeat an opponent - in fact it doesn't aim to defeat oopponents at all. I'll rewrite it and look forward to your comments later.

New Work

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A lot of work has been done on this page now. How does one request to remove hidden categories that suggest content is unreliable?Edobarn (talk) 00:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)Reply

Citations

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Good talking to you both today. Let's use this page to find a list of citations bulk out the article a bit and make it more authoritative. Silhouettist (talk) 20:10, 13 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

Agreed.ISC-dlo (talk) 04:15, 15 January 2015 (UTC)Reply