Talk:Sheena Bora murder case
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editWhen considering if a term should be linked or not, please consider WP:OVERLINK. I just cut a lot of excessive links from the article. A term should be generally linked only once in the body of the article unless the article gets fairly long, which this one certainly isn't. Thanks!
Discussion related to names of "relatives" in this article can be read at WT:IN. CLICK HERE. --Human3015Send WikiLove 15:42, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
- See also discussion at BLPN. Abecedare (talk) 13:18, 4 September 2015 (UTC)
A note
editWhile the earlier version did provide the maximum amount of information to the reader and accurately summarized the various theories and speculations floating around, we have to be mindful of our BLP policy especially WP:LIBEL, WP:BLPCRIME and WP:BLPNAME. We are an encyclopedia afterall, and policies like WP:NPOV and WP:NOTNEWS are there for a reason. I apologise for the extremely hostile manner in which the article has been pruned. The Masked Man of Mega Might (talk) 16:25, 4 September 2015 (UTC)
- Yes. The intro to the article says "Khanna confessed to the crime," and the heading for the reference says "Sheena Bora murder case: Sanjeev Khanna confesses to role in crime". Fine, but unfortunately that particular reference also quite clearly states "he has denied the police charges". Just saying. Moriori (talk) 00:07, 20 November 2015 (UTC)
Why?
editI just read the whole article and was disappointed to find no hint of the reason why she was killed. This is basically a journalistic report and so, the five Ws should be addressed. —capmo (talk) 01:03, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
- capmo, if this is bothering you, you're free to research it and provide the answers. This is a volunteer project, after all. Some potential resources: [1][2][3] Cyphoidbomb (talk) 16:59, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for providing the links, but I'll defer this research to others. This is not the kind of topic that I like editing on my spare time. I ended up here just because a friend of mine cited this case on a post of hers. —capmo (talk) 02:56, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
Unnecessarily long, wording could be improved
editThe section titled "Discovery of death of Sheena Bora and subsequent investigation" seems longer than necessary, and part of it does not read like an encyclopedic article. I don't have any information on this case, so I'd feel more comfortable with somebody else looking into it. -- UKoch (talk) 23:24, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
- Another user removed most of the section, so my concerns have been addressed. Thanks! -- UKoch (talk) 19:44, 4 February 2018 (UTC)