Talk:Pietro Vidoni

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Stalwart111 in topic Biography

Biography edit

An explanation of some of my changes:

  • Removed the birth and death locations from the intro. Where full dates are available, location is generally not necessary for immediate identification. Birth and death locations are included in the article.
  • Added sub-headings just to make the article a little easier to read
  • Fixed some basic grammar - but it was in pretty good shape to begin with.
  • Added reference

Hope everyone is okay with that.

Regards, Stalwart111 (talk) 22:55, 2 November 2009 (UTC).Reply