-Good, very thorough!
-Remember to cite your sources at the bottom.
-You might want to split the article into sections.
Diana Nielsen —Preceding unsigned comment added by Dnielsen8 (talkcontribs) 20:54, 15 May 2007

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Hey Aaron, looks very explanatory. I like the sections you made, and I really think the picture gives a great reference. -Charles Lansbury —Preceding unsigned comment added by 199.74.82.169 (talkcontribs) 22:28, 17 May 2007

Wow! This entry looks very Wikipedia-y! It is clear that you know what you are doing. I especially like your separate headlines as well as your picture. It helped me to understand what you were talking about. It is clear that you spent a lot of time and effort on your research! Good job. Your references look amazing! The Pictones Rule!

^ Lauren-A.B. —Preceding unsigned comment added by LABucha (talkcontribs) 01:44, 18 May 2007