Talk:Pasto Ventura

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Pasto Ventura/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 00:54, 20 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Criteria edit

1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations   Likely

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 14:38, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Comments edit

1.

  • Per MOS:OVERLINK, I'm not sure if Argentina needs linked
    Unlinked. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Link Los Nacimientos, make sure you get the right one from the dab page Los Nacimientos, they both seem to be in the applicable province
    Linked, bit I can't say that I am very sure on this. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "deposits of lapilli, lava bombs and scoria" - Link scoria
    Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "7 volcanic domes,[6] 2 maars and 3 tuff rings;" - I think MOS:NUMERALS applies here
    Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Mafic is a duplink
  • All sections should be summarized in the lead, the climate and vegetation section isn't.
    Both done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

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  • The reference titles and author's name shouldn't be in allcaps
  • Should refs 4 and 5 have accessdates since the sources are online?
  • Ref 35 same as above
Done, added to 4 and 5 but not to 35 as that is a journal article. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

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  • Is an image of this freely available? I understand that with many subjects there isn't one.
    Not as far as I know. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Good work. Placing this one of hold, only a few things to address. Hog Farm (talk) 22:42, 20 May 2020 (UTC)Reply