Talk:Pastamania

Latest comment: 10 years ago by 213.215.245.38 in topic Article is edited slightly

Article is edited slightly edit

It has been edited to provide more objective and neutral information. The "marketing-speak", so to say, has been removed, as the source is from a website that is trying to sell the franchise. Such a point of view may somehow be considered as biased and incredible.

213.215.245.38 (talk) 19:23, 19 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

Article reads like an advertisement edit

This article reads like an advertisement from the company. Articles should be written in third person, and provide objective view of the subject of the article. As it is, the article currently projects the subject, PastMania restaurant, as telling the reader about itself and how good it is.

Tigey (talk) 17:00, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Reply