Talk:My Boy (Billie Eilish song)

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Review: July 28, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )

3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Because of your work on "Hotter than Hell", I will be taking this on. I'll try to get to it soon. LOVI 33 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

"a song recorded by American" → "a song by American"
"debut studio EP" → "debut extended play (EP)"
The SWMRS cover doesn't seem notable for the lead, remove it
"It has been certified by several" → ""My Boy" has been awarded several"
"most notably" → "including a"

Background and composition

Target single to Single (music)
Target EP to extended play
"According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com" → "According to sheet music published by Universal Music Publishing Group at Musicnotes.com", with target
"F_#3 to B₄" ← "F♯₃ to B₄", using Template:music

Reception

Remove "Upon its release,"
"and felt its chorus" → "and felt it's chorus"
Remove "most notably"

Live performances and other usages

Change title to "Promotion and other usages"

Track listing

Looks good!

Credits and personnel

Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is usually used if recording locations are also involved
target liner notes to itself

Charts

MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Chart position for "My Boy"
Which year did it peak in? Change to Chart (Year peaked)

Certifications

MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Certifications and sales for "My Boy"
Fix bottom so sales+streaming figures are shown

Release history

MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Release dates and formats for "My Boy"
"Country" → "Region"
"Format" → "Format(s)"

References

Make sure all these are archived using the tool
copyvio score looks good at 18.0%
A better source is needed for ref 1, a source to an EP that is unarchived doesn't confirm it's release
Target Don't Smile at Me to itself in ref 2
Target Billboard to Billboard (magazine) in ref 7

Final comments and verdict

On hold for now. Once issues are fixed I will pass it. LOVI 33 18:38, 27 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

LOVI33 I have addressed all the issues. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:45, 27 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Great!, thats a ✓ Pass. LOVI 33 01:57, 28 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

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