Talk:Maine Pyar Kiya

Rewrite

I rewrote for style. The synopsis was long and muddled; I tried to make it shorter and snappier. Zora 06:55, 12 September 2006 (UTC)

Thanks. --25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣ 16:11, 4 August 2014 (UTC)

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"Dil Deewaana" song

Parts of this song sounds similar to "Run These Streets" (Year of the dog). I wonder if one was inspired or copied from the other. If yes, then this information can be included on this page. Thank you. Ravi arnie (talk) 21:30, 25 September 2020 (UTC)

 Added--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 09:01, 2 June 2021 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Maine Pyar Kiya/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Non-free use rationale for the film poster looks good.
• This link says the runtime is 173 minutes so the 192/125 runtimes need citations.

 Added—25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

The 192 minute version still needs a source. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:20, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

I apologize, just added. Have a look.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 07:27, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

• "an 1989 Indian Hindi-language" → "a 1989 Indian Hindi-language"

 Done.—25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after Ajit Vachani.

 Done.—25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "two individuals".

 Done.—25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "The film released" → "The film was released"

 Done.—25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "earning most praise" → "earning the most praise"

 Done.—

• "The film features the score and soundtrack composed by Raamlaxman. Filming predominantly took place in Ooty." These sentences are in the last paragraph after mentioning the film's release/reception. I would suggest moving/merging them into the first paragraph.

 Done.—25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "the score and soundtrack composed by Raamlaxman" - can this be changed to simply "music composed by Raamlaxman"?

Actually I am not sure if music includes both songs and backgroud music. Hence, I mentioned score and soundtrack individually. Your thoughts?--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Is it okay to have two paragrphs in lead because if I make it three it gives lots of spaces. Please suggest.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:51, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Two-three paragraphs are normal for a film article but for this size, I recommend three. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:53, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• No issues here (passes WP:FILMPLOT). Great work!

Production

• Remove the colon after "additional production credits include".

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after Deepak Tijori.

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "but was replaced" → "he was replaced"

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "in the last minute" → "at the last minute"

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "Bhagyashree who had done lead role in" → "Bhagyashree, who had a lead role in"

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "changes in script" → "changes in the script" or "changes to the script"

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "eventually Bhagyashree giving nod to the film" - bit wordy so reword.

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "Mohnish Bahl who played villain's role in the film, veteran actress and Bahl's mother Nutan" - same with this sentence.

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "will be remembered" → "would be remembered" (already happened)

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Mate, I have made few additions to Casting section. Let me know what you think.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:50, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Release

• Remove the comma after Lima.

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• That's all I could find here.

Soundtrack

• Make this a "Music" subsection or simply move it under #Production.

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after S. P. Balasubrahmanyam.

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Add a source to replace the "citation needed" tag.

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "Aaya Mausam Dosti Ka" too features - typo?

? Suggestion please--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed Check now. Please let me know if the sentence has got grammatical error.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 07:53, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Looks good . Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:29, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

• "from a western hit" → "by a western hit"

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "too are partly inspired" → "were also partly inspired"

 Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Accolades

• Reorder this along with #Release and #Box_office per WP:MOSFILM.

• It should look like this:

==Release==

==Reception==

===Box office===

===Accolades===

Take a look now.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:44, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:53, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Were there no reviews for this movie?

Sure. Allow me a day or two to have it.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:43, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Couldn't find much information related to reviews. However have added a little bit.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 11:35, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

References

• Update the British Board of Film Classification (#1) link.

 Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^☣✅ 18:41, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Every archivable source is archived.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Reviews

• Stardust --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 13:06, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

 Added Thank you mate!--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 07:51, 22 June 2021 (UTC)

Lead

Someone has been tampering with the lead section of the article. I have rectified it. Please be advised that I will keep a strict watch on this article. I will not hesitate to report those who intentionally cause damage. Thanks. 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 13:25, 26 March 2024 (UTC)